A great story. Very funny.

Yet it had no relevance to the current situation, and therefore was still useless, because it wasn’t successful at shielding Crash from the two very irritated men.

That's my favorite line out of the whole thing. Who would've thought of jump roping with a whip> :D

Wow, randomness. Cute randomness.

...I could just imagine Maccus, Jimmy and Crash all giggling like schoolgirls, skipping on the whip. And the thought of Davy saying 'quack quack' for some reason really made me chuckle.

Loved it. You should write humour more often. Humour is god. (though I, unfortunately, seem unable to write anything but humour.)

squeeks x

Very funny! Either this was some sort of school assignment, or you have an extensive vocabulary (which is a compliment).

I love the randomness to this, and Davy Jones saying 'quack' just had me in hysterics. Great job ^_^

Heheh, you actually wrote it! XDD And I love it! Jimmy so needs a hug. *huggle* And I liked seeing Crash in here too. He's another one of my faves. Awesome!!

I totally didn't see where this was going. :D
Brilliance.

Whoa, things certainly took an unexpected turn there (pun intended.)

Cute!