...why, at that last line, did I picture Optimus Prime sprawled on a lawn chair with one of those outrageous Hawaiian shirts and a cold drink on some beach somewhere? Creepyplz.
Eh, but the next image of him hunched over some small desk tapping away at a computer wasn't so good either.

Nice fic, anyway.

It was interesting to see what the Autobots would do after the war. But what would Optimus do?

that was neat little fic. loved the ending. hope you more soon.

This is a great start, but you know you have to keep going and tell us what Prime would do...just keep him out of a desk job for sure! Just 'cause he started in a desk job doesn't mean he will want to continue that once the war is over...be creative =)

good story. Keep it up.

Heh, Optimus'd probably end up tied up in red-tape. If he's smart, he'll get himself an 'Enterprise' and go exploring. Keeping the distance will keep his mystique.