O.o That would explain so much...

that was very interesting. but not in a bad way it is very diferent and has good yaoi

That was so bizarre! O.o

I say that kindly. Seeing as towards the end, I quite liked it. Let's see, what to say... it was definitely refreshing. The whole concept of Touya being an alien was... shocking but strangely believable. Although I do think that he was a bit out of character, I suppose it's ok considering the fact that they are no longer on Earth and they can indeed stop with all the pretence.

Hmm, the ending was kind of abrupt. I would have liked it better if you expanded further. Still, that was quite entertaining, so thank you for sharing!

that's it?! Oh please, add more! i don't really like yaoi that much, but i like the fact that you put the character's actually personalities into it, which takes the cake! please do more to it!