One of my all time favourites SasuSaku fics. Now too sure why it took me so long to review, but I must have read it a dozen times over the past 2 years =)

"I'll see what I can do." That was the PERFECT way to phrase it. Your fics are making this a VERY good day! Yay! Great job!

Very well written, I loved it.

this is weird and all because I'm usually a narusaku fan instead of a sasusaku fan, but a friend of mine kept obsessing over how good your story was, so before I got bugged to death, I finally got around to reading it. But surprisingly enough, I liked it! The way you incorporated sasuke's patience and love for sakura (its there, but just below the surface) and the way it bubbles up at times made me get a warm fuzzy feeling. Although i think that im really gonna get flamed for this because you are definitely a sasusaku fan right? Anyway, its just the way that sakura displays her discerning side--knowing just when to push him and when to let go--All i can say that its a fantastic job. thanks for writing.

This is the most beautiful thing I have ever read. It was simple, wonderfully sweet and your way of words knocks me off my feet. Its really amazing and even if I had 1200 years I wouldn't be able to write like this. Its amazing, absolutely spectacular. I loved all the little bits and pieces of love and Sasuke - Sasuke the BEST. Not too OOC, but it seemed like there was hope for him.

I love this.

Beautiful.

There is no happily ever after there is a "once-upon-a-time".

That was brilliant. You're a great author. I love the words you use.

My favourite line:

"This is how it ends: Once upon a time -"

<3

I love how Sakura dreams and hopes even though Sasuke knocks them down - she never seems to give up. Very lovely.

:)

amazing.

-zanibarr

Aw This Was So Sweet
I could feel the Sugar sprinkled all over t,
Your words in this story are very Broad.
Very long range.
You can tell a lot of personality frim it.
:)
It was a very Cute story.
Haha Love it times infinity!!

that was really cute it was real like i was watching somthing someone videotaped ...good job

aww! that was just too CUTE!! lvoe the ending!! _<

Can I cry now from the sweetness of the simple pure romance?

haha, that's funny :) and sweet :D

I read this a very long time ago and neglected to review ( a mistake of epic proportions) and I just recently came across it again. This story never fails to pull my heart strings. Its beautifully written and I adore it (along with all your other work). Just simply wonderful.

I crave frozen watermelons now. i havent even EVER had them.
Heck, i don't even LIKE watermelons.
simply awesome story. made me feel all nice and fuzzy inside.
I'm going to have to read your other stories =).

oh this was woderful! really, it was cute and witty, smart, guh. lovely to see them like that. i'm always a sucker for theses types of AU. :D

"not so much a loyal puppy, but an entirely self-sufficient, aloof cat" <-- really good line. :D
it is their beginning. yesh. guh. so freaking lovely!~

This is cute. XD
Haha, sorry, I'm not sure what else I can say. I felt that Sasuke was very...Sasuke-like? Down-to-earth, for sure. Good fic. =)

`xx.false-deception