This is actually really intersting. I don't know if you are planning on continuing the story but I really hope so. I want to know what happens next. And if you were discouraged by lack of reviews, don't be. Resubmit your story in another category and maybe change the name Kelly (to match a character in the new subject). I could totally see this being Twilight. I don't know how you feel about that but those fanfics definitely get read and reviewed. So please update in anyway possible _

Good story. It might make it easier to read if it was split up into smaller paragraphs, but I liked it.

Far-fetched, but chilling.

I like this story so much! Sorry, I won't tell you more, my english is so bad I'd like to linch myself. Anyway, your story is very funny. Even if truly scared ! And the end is verry good!

I like this