You should continue Ugly Duckling again. It's a wonderful story, I really love it.I hope you finish it and write a sequel. You got some real talent in writing.

please

sweet

wat will happen next please please update

That was just fantastic!

you need to update real soon

i love the way you have made Anna seem more mature than an average 6 yr old because she's Bettys daughter.

are you going to get Daniel to tell Betty that Anna called him "Daddy"? that section was 'aw'.

please keep writing and updating because it's a really good storyline

p.s i also agree with the bit about Eric 'sighs' on your authors note at the end of chapter one

Hahahah! I so love Justin. Betty having a child is quite amusing, too.

I hope you keep writing i love your story

I've just had the pleasure of reading all 12 chapters in one go and I'm thoroughly enjoying your fic. I love your characterisations, and especially the character arc you're taking Daniel through. Each chapter has just gotten better and better. This new installment was another great piece of writing. I loved Daniel's nerves and reaction to Betty, as well as the interaction between Justin and Betty. Keep up the great work and update asap please! I can't wait to see what happens next and how Betty reacts to the fact that Francis thinks She and Daniel are married and Anna is their daughter. Thanks for posting this.

OMG!

I love this chapter and all of them actually it's ten thirty and i am reading this i read this in half and hour.

Love this UPDATE SOON!

I hate henry DETTY please!

I think you did a really good job and I am looking forward to the Dinner I have a feeling the secret mite come out! Anyways awesome job!

that was nice...

Great chapter, more soon!

Good job! Update real soon! D Dinner should be exciting.

Love it. Add more soon,

Is there anyway you were able to retrieve the last chapter. I would love to know how it works out.

sory if im being stupied, but i loved your story and im wondering if you are considering updating the last chapter that you mentioned it was almost done.

i feel in love with Anna, always been with daniel and miss reading them thru your story