POOR BLUESTREAK! Will he be alright? I hope so!! PLEASE MORE BLUE, but even if you don't great story love it and am looking forward to the next chapter!!

Yeah! Things are looking good. Bring on the Wreckers! I enjoyed this chapter, but you already know that. :)

This is awesome! Feel sorry for Bluestreak, though.

this outta be good. poor blue. does prowl know yet? keep it up.

poor Blue
looks like Hot Rod is gonna get some action in

Great end on the Magnus-Grimlock-Wreckers scene!
“** off, Ironhide.” Sunstreaker growled
Sorry, I missed this: The full-stop after Ironhide should be a comma.
Also, I can't tell who is saying this line:
“The mission has gone well for the most part. Now we just have to get the prisoners back to base, the missions not complete until then.”
The Decepticons are all in fine form. Scheming against both 'friend' and foe.
Wonderful chapter! Keep the pressure on them, and don't keep us waiting for the next part! :D

Hey, cool. Great portrayal of the Wreckers there! And Sunstreaker too. He's not a bad mech, but he sure has an awful lot of trouble following orders, and it's more about doing his own thing than actually having a problem with the orders themselves. Of course, it's probably difficult for a trained killer to accept a "zero death count" order. But he'd better learn, or it'll have consequences for both him and his twin...

Nice work! Hope this turns out well, it's real interesting so far!

that was very interesting. good job. keep going.

I tried reviewing yesterday and it kept giving me errors.
Great chapter! The set-up hints and a really good pay-off down the line, especially with the Decepticons and Sunstreaker both interested in the stuff. I love that Grimlock finds Ultra Magnus amusing and Magnus doesn't know why.

lol poor ratchet

you are not seriously gonna have sunny do that are you? sunny's enough of a killer already. he doesn't need help. awesome chapter. keep going.

Looks good so far; don't forget to correct the fact you posted two of the same chapter. :)

Heya. I didn't think much of chapter 1, but this chapter has me hooked. I like your characterisation, and you have good pacing so far. Do you want me to beta for spelling and punctuation? You need more commas. :) Drop me a note if you want me to. Other then that, I'm really looking forward to chapter 3!

that was cool
even sunny was having a hard time with him
hope to read more soon

awesome. tons of action. lovin' this fic. update soon.