Since this hasn't been updated in years, I doubt that you're ever going to finish it. But I'm still going to put it on alert, 'cause I'm wierd like that.

'Nyways, this is a really good fic. It's a good idea, showing what someone who's unplugged as a child would go through.

Poor Neo, no one thinks he can come up with a proper plan now.

XD

Hedwigs-pet-dalek

(P.S - I got the Harry Potter references XD)

Great story :) Are you gonna finish this? I hope so!

Are you going to finish this story at some point? I'm just curious. Your Neo is as lovable and dorky as ever (ripping the sleeve on his shirt *g*)

Since this was posted in 2002 I'm guessing you probably won't update. It is an interesting idea: someone who is unplugged so young she never really had a chance to make the choice.

I can't wait until the next chapter comes. This is a very original fic, and I love it. Keep it up!

what elce can i say? more please. i love it!

this is excellent! Maria is a great name, better than the overused weird names. i love the plot and i cannot wait for part five! excellent trin/neo fluff section and i love the 'swear creatively' part, too. much character! please, keep writing, i will definitely keep up with your stuff & check for updates.

Hey! You updated! I love the character you've made up here - she's fascinating, and so REAL. I hope we don't have to wait so long for ch. 5...

Awwww! Neo is such a cutey! He can take me down the rabbit hole any day!

Great story. Could you please post a new chapter very soon? You're making a great job on developing Maria, so keep it up.

Danie.

Wow this chapter was great! Please write more soon.

I love your story! Please get that next chapter up soon!

That is a good story so far. I can't wait to read the other chapters! Sayonora and keep up the good work!

Wow! I can't believe I never reviewed this, either. Bad me, I should know better. Anyway, dahling, this is great, not a whole lot else to expound on. Excellent writing, love your characters- so update when you can, ok? I'll be watching this time, I promise. Scottishlass

Wha... so I click on the review button after your latest update, and realize that I, like an idiot, have never reviewed this thing! Stupid me. This is so good. I really like it. The character conflict is just... fantastic, and your new character is really interesting. Please say we won't have to wait so long for ch. 4?

Well- this indeed was a good story...All i want is something happening...maybee Neo's fears getting true...that she was too young...don't know! but I would love some more T/N scenes...they're the best! *LOL*

hugz, Misty