Wow I loved the outline of this story. Especially since I have never seen a story laid out like this before. Excellent!

Ja!

TaintedDarkInuShemeeko

Aw man! I knew it was going to end like that, but damn. I wanted them together.So what about if they meet up later on in life. (hint hint) Passer-bys might become something more. Can you tell I want a follow up or what.

Nice ending, I wish it had continued, but that would have defeated the purpose of the title. At least Kagome got over him.

ZOMG!
that left shivers in my spine.
but idk.xD.
it's kinda sad, yet i understand the concept.
sad really coz i went through almost the same thing.
... keep up the good work!
JaNe