|Reviews for Without|
| shiznat13 5/17/13 . chapter 8
well. i don't care about mai as long as SHIZNAT is back :) hahaha
| Zi-Zhuu 1/6/11 . chapter 2
I know I shouldn't be rooting for it, but: Woohoo! Shizuru!
| scotsman 8/3/10 . chapter 1
why is natsuki so depressed that shizuru fucking someone else a the end of chapter two when she fucks mai at the end of the first chapter. it's not like she was being any more faithful.
| bitchynovich 6/5/10 . chapter 2
-MUHAHAHAHAHA- IM LOVING EVERY BIT OF IT...
ERR NOW IM STARTING TO WONDER IF IM A MASOCHIST OR WHAT
BUT REALLY LIKE IT...BUT HEY! REALLY SHIZURU SUCK THE -TUTUT-? OW EW...I ONLY CAN IMAGINE HER DOING 'THAT' TO NATSUKI BUT OW WELL...
AND I LIKE THE NATMAI...THUMBS UP
| bitchynovich 6/5/10 . chapter 1
woa...THAT REALLY ROCK MY WORD..HAHAHA
MM IS THAT AFTER AN HOUR WHEN SHIZURU LEAVE THAT NATSUKI 'FUCK' MAI? WAY TO GO NATSUKI...U DOG U..HAHA
NICE LOVE IT
| Renkhal 10/11/09 . chapter 8
This was just so tragic... But, it ended so beautifully!
I think I want to cry... but I can't...
| MelodicFlan 4/13/08 . chapter 8
hmm I love the ending line... There's not much to say except that betas make a difference...
man without errors... (i'm going to bluntly say this)
your writing becomes tens and thousands times better...
It was a great fic... I don't think I need to say more...
I'm a woman of few words anywayz.
| MelodicFlan 4/13/08 . chapter 7
The ending is next... Mai is probably waiting hmm... yet Shiznat is Shiznat...
I was able to totally picture that scene where Natsuki finally saw Shizuru again... everything had this hollywood style capturing in my head for no reason...
| MelodicFlan 4/13/08 . chapter 6
Now she's back... yet they were unable to catch each other...I find that ...so sad...I mean some times i connect my experiences to the wrong things... bleh
I just hope Mai will be okay now O_O... Natsuki too... I'm just wondering how it will all end..
| MelodicFlan 4/13/08 . chapter 5
Hmm... man this MaiNat isn't becoming a full fledged coupling like I had hope for it to be... but then again u're a shiznat fan... dammit all i must search for some mainat later lol
Okay...I really suck at reviews... Like...words just don't come out as easy anymore...
| MelodicFlan 4/13/08 . chapter 4
I can't wait to see what happens next. Good thing that this story is complete... hmm sleep is not needed right now but i feel my eyes ...turning into slits? lol
I feel kind of sorry for erin... I wonder how Natsuki is fairing...
| MelodicFlan 4/13/08 . chapter 3
Wow what a powerful insight in the life of Fujino Shizuru! I really love how you're able to describe emotions. I mean...I can kinda tell you're not a descriptions kind of author, and that's okay.
But...Erin... hmm, I find it sad that it's true that we need to use someone sometimes to...forget at least a miniscule fraction of our pain.
| MelodicFlan 4/13/08 . chapter 2
K, thus begins my journey of once again reading all your stories. I'm not having a writer's block right now but I just can't seem to write..
like the ideas are there yet I refuse?
Hmm well anyways on to the review...
Which i have nothing to say about...
I mean i know there are grammar errors but who cares about that? I mean I could fix all those stories that you have but...watever I'll let you decide...
As for the story... I really wanted to see a MaiNat. I've ALWAYS wanted a nonshiznat couple. It's driving me crazy that it's always Shiznat...
So I'm looking forward to how this turns out. I can totally tell that Natsuki is having a nervous breakdown...
| SpiderLilies2007 12/4/07 . chapter 8
OK, I've changed my mind...XD This story is really heartbreaking. But -" Take the bus home.." *smack on Natsuki head for beeing so mean* ..haha...but ShizNat all the way *yay-champagne for everyone-cheers*
| EBT 11/30/07 . chapter 8
One of the more disappointing shiznat fics I've ever read... I skimmed to the last chapter but it didn't get much better. I think the two main problems with it are:
1)The plot is highly unlikely given Natsuki's loyal character (and her respect for Mai as a good friend) and Shizuru's sensible and obsessive nature with regards to Natsuki.
2)The way the characters talk just really annoy me. Slightly too American perhaps. Some of the lines just were also very cliché, like Shizuru as a fallen angel with broken wings etc. It just didn't match the mood of the fic at all.
Please don't give up writing and I'm sure shiznat fans will be looking forward to your future fics.