 Mistress Lommira 2009-11-28 . chapter 8 Its too bad. i liked the relationship Goren had with Denise... she was so nice and she was good for him... and btw Maggie is his isnt she. and Ricky kinda knows it doesnt he. i cant wait till they find out. Ricky's gonna be mad |
 tigerlily124 2009-10-28 . chapter 22Hi there! I enjoyed this chapter! Good job! I wish Eames would just leave her husband. Hmm...how about having her husband completely lose it and beat the crap out of Goren - that would make her see the light. Thanks! |
 TriStateCopFan 2009-10-18 . chapter 22Whew...good updates! Glad Denise and Eames talked it out. At least now she knows how he feels --and have finally admitted how she feels, too. I kinda felt sorry for Denise, but she's strong -- and at least made the ethical decision. Looks like it's up to Maggie to bring these two together! Good stuff! |
 rindy713 2009-10-18 . chapter 22that was raw and authentic. i cried for bobby! and i felt for both denise and alex as they talked. what a mess when people's timing is so out of sync. denise has done the right thing every step of the way. she is very selfless. poor bobby tried to do the right thing; he just can't help his feelings. i can't blame him for what he did at the end. he and the woman he picked up are both in pain and settling for numbness. thank goodness he has maggie in his life! |
 The Mominator 2009-10-18 . chapter 22Always a treat to read an update to this story. Enjoyable read once again, thanks. |
 Gypsy5 2009-10-18 . chapter 22A really poignant chapter, one which makes your heart reach out to Bobby, but in my case it goes out to Eames and her turmoil. I do wonder how and when and what circumstances she tells Goren about “that” night or will he remember…. |
 Heathersinaz 2009-10-17 . chapter 22Ok, I love your Choices series.
Have you ever heard Lee Ann Womack's "The Fool"? This song cycled through on my iPod playlist today and as I listened to it a 2nd time It struck me as being 100% Denise's song throughout this story. Her prospective on Bobby and Alex and herself.
I'm 100% for Bobby and Alex, but I really love the way you've portrayed Denise throughout your stories. I'd love to see her get her happy ending when all is said and done.
Keep up the writing, You're one of my favorites authors here and I can't wait to see where you take us next! |
 star jelly 2009-10-17 . chapter 22That chapter was sad, but really good. I can't wait to read more! |
 cifan 2009-10-17 . chapter 22Two nice, quick updates. This was a powerful chapter. I really enjoyed it. |
 bammi1 2009-10-17 . chapter 22Poor Bobby. He got a raw deal out of all this. Everyone seems to be messing with him. I wish he could find some happiness. At least he has Maggie; he will always have Maggie. |
 annette 2009-10-17 . chapter 1 This is one of my favorite stories. Glad you kept writing. |
 YaneDirnt20 2009-10-17 . chapter 22I'm like, on the verge of tears right now. Bobby? Beautiful, sweet, messed up Bobby. Oh man, I really hope that everything starts to work out because I don't know how much more of the heartbreak I can take. XD
Amazing chapter as always! Great job and I can't wait to read more. |
 BASRIC 2009-10-17 . chapter 21Let's face it, the proposal needed to be sabotaged.
nice writing. |
 YaneDirnt20 2009-10-17 . chapter 21Wow, haven't seen this story in awhile. XD
Great chapter. This story makes me so sad, you know, because of the situation, but I know that there will be a happy ending. At least I hope so. Great job! I really hope that everything will turn out alright... |
 mitzvahgirl 2009-10-17 . chapter 21Thanks goodness Maggie wanted to see her Uncle Bobby--or more likely that Mommy was worried to death about him. Besides, engagement interruptus is a good thing if Bobby was out with a harpie the night before.
Thank you for updating this story! Can't wait until Maggie hits three so some of the angst can disappear! ;) |