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| lighthalk 2007-11-03 ch 2,  | abuseneed more. I love you story. |
| Cyde 2007-10-16 ch 1, | abuseWHOa |
| dennisud 2007-10-09 ch 3, | abuseWow a rarely imaginitive and unique premise. Yes there has been others where Ranma finds himself in an alternate reality. Also he's older and was married to an adult Akane. I actually see him closer in age to a Now normal kasumi. nabiki well it seems she will be the focus of this Ramna now. Wonder if Gemna here even knew Soun! dennisud |
| Innortal 2007-10-09 ch 3, | abuseLooking good so far, can't wait to see what comes up next. |
| moritynz 2007-10-09 ch 3, | abusenot 100% sure where this is headig but im interested in reading more, keep it up |
| phoenix.ru 2007-10-08 ch 3, | abuseAh... mystery, mystery ^_^ |
| Gangsta Spanksta 2007-10-08 ch 3, | abuseBasically, you're a good writer that writes something that can keep my interest. Your grammar and style are no problem. Your chapters are too short though. It's like I feel cheated. I'm reading something great, and then all of the sudden it's like, "is this it?" Please, do try to write longer chapters. At least 2500 words per chapter. |
| Dumbledork 2007-10-08 ch 3, | abuseGreat work so far. I'm pretty sure Ranma's lies will come back to bite him in the ** though. |
| Nysk 2007-10-08 ch 3, | abuseVery interesting... I wonder where you are going with this... I look forward to finding out |
| Upgrade 2007-10-08 ch 2, | abuseHuh. Interesting story you have here. Not sure where you're headed with this, but I like it so far. |
| JhyarelleDrakon 2007-10-08 ch 1, | abusetag |
| Gangsta Spanksta 2007-10-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseShort, but very well written. It's nice to see quality every once in awhile :) |
| Dumbledork 2007-10-08 ch 1, | abuseThis looks interesting so far. |