Lovely little ficlet that expands on the characters seen in the movie. Not all that insightful to the characters though.

I realize that Quartus was killed by Secundus but you forgot to mention him in this story.

I liked that very much. I felt bad for the buys those men were being raised by a man who expressed no love for his offspring and expected them to kill each other.

Thanks for the alternate perspective. Great character dissections for such a short piece.:)

-Ellie

Good story! Brief, but with lots of depth!

Read this on the rec of Sedri. Very well done. It was touching but true to form. Good job.

Nice story but in bookverse the three suriving brothers had killed one brother apiece, except Septimus who had killed two. Secundus was dead before the start of the book and Tertius was described as wary. I can't really see Primus not wanting to be Lord of Stormhold either. And I'm pretty sure they left their father's remains in the Hall of Ancestors.

Well done. Even without scene setup I could practically see the whole thing. You've got me hooked. Now I have to go read the Stardust book. Any more fillers for the book in plan?

I saw this on 'stardustfanfic', but thought I'd leave a review here anyway. :D

I love the story! (The world needs more Stardust fan fiction...)