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| Silverdancer 2008-03-24 ch 1,  | abusesque! |
| Xeal II 2008-01-06 ch 1, | abuseAmazing work. I must admit I never thought of Cloud returning to the Gold Saucer until I read this... It's a very original idea. Still the story is slightly sad.. but that's a good thing :). Great job. |
| roxas-kh 2007-10-19 ch 1, | abuseI always wondered what it might have been like for him to go on that ride again. good job. |
| asga 2007-10-10 ch 1, | abuseo.O its kinda sad but sweet at the same time *sigh* Hope you write more story like this :D |
| Seizalyn 2007-10-08 ch 1, | abuseLynn here. ;) The end is full of love: that Cloud unthinkingly "answered" Aerith's "I want to meet you" line with his last line in the game. Even if it seemed to fly right over his head in the gondola itself, deep inside, Cloud knew what she was asking for. I admit, I actually did a double-take at the beginning when Cloud asked for one ticket. Like, "Did I read that right? ...Oh, yeah, ONE ticket. Ooh. :O" A spiffy take on this theme, great job! |