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Whispering Lotus
2008-09-08
ch 1,
abuseYou wrote "I'll update soon" when is that soon going to be? Besides it's a cliffhanger, you should really continue this story it's very good. It would be a shame to ditch it (-.-) please update more :C
cantspell
2008-09-07
ch 1,
abusehi. i'm not trying to be a smart a** and i'm still new to this stuff but didnt ya write this on 10-08-07(if i understand correctly , that is). and didn't ya say "I'll update soon."?...ok, where's the update? where's the rest of or MORE of the story? Huh,huh,huh? ya've got me hooked...you've used your wondedful imagenation to create a story and bring it to life.don't stop now...i like the story...write on...p.s. sorry about my spelling.
Chrono.X.Rosette
2008-06-03
ch 1,
abusethis is awesome!, plz hurry and finish it

plz = please
prettygirl17
2008-02-22
ch 1,
abuseI'm very interested in this. I hope you update soon.
Diabolical Kitsutora
2008-01-12
ch 1,
abuseYou lie! T.T I read this a while ago and you still haven't updated it yet! T.T Please do that soon!
Shakuma-Marie-Uchiha
2007-12-02
ch 1,
abusenext chapter. NOW.
theo darkstar
2007-11-04
ch 1,
abusehey great start...so whats wrong with chrno? is he ever going to be the little boy in this story? hes cute as a little boy! and is the baby his or aions?
Dragoon-Yue
2007-10-21
ch 1,
abuseWow... The prospect of being a dad scared him pretty bad... Anyway, when do you plan on updating?
PaCT
2007-10-11
ch 1,
abusebaby with pale VIOLET hair? Chrono's acting really suspicious. is it HIS baby? hurry and update!
Mandanza
2007-10-10
ch 1,
abuseOh Noes Chrono is sick! D:
And he has a baby? o_O And he acted like he knew something about it, too... Suspicious...
Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next chapter :)
Synonymous Brian
2007-10-09
ch 1,
abuseIt's pretty good, and the idea's rather interesting. Rosette was a little ooc back there when she started crying into Chrno's chest. ^_^;

Anyways, I hope you update soon!
Crescent Zenith
2007-10-09
ch 1,
abuseThis is different from other stories of chrono crusade that I've read; especially the actions of the characters, but I'm open to change. I'll be looking forward to your next update.
Lupus Animi
2007-10-09
ch 1,
abusecoolcoolcool! Update soon please!
Cherry Maiden
2007-10-08
ch 1,
abuse... ._. i... think... its ... Chrno's... but how? Did some chick come and rape him? maybe the nuns or... AZ?! OH DEAR GOD! HURRY CAUSE IM GETTING SOME PRETTY BIZARE THOUGHTS HERE!
MisoGirl
2007-10-08
ch 1,
abuseBaby?
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