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| janib 2007-11-08 ch 9,  | abuseYeah, more scary stories please. Back in the 70s on night duty, I used to read Coma and the Fog. Scarier they were, the better it was until a patient called out. Used to be the only things that kept me awake! That is why I am reading this in the daylight hours! |
| samarie 2007-11-07 ch 9, | abuseWant more? no- NEED more! lol you got us on the edge of our seats here, please keep it coming! this chapter was great, can't wait to see what happens next to our favorite team |
| corkieshome 2007-11-05 ch 9, | abuseOhh creepy! Great continuation on the story - keep going! Can't wait to see what happens next! :0) |
| ArwenUndomiel 2007-10-28 ch 8, | abuseGreat you've got me super hooked! I love it! Must read more and find out what is going on!! |
| ArwenUndomiel 2007-10-28 ch 2, | abuseGreat Description...really great. Am enjoying so far. Great start too btw, having John tell the story in the mess. It puts a different spin on things. |
| janib 2007-10-27 ch 8, | abuseYou are evil leaving us like that and I don't care that you uploaded 2 chapters! |
| janib 2007-10-27 ch 7, | abuseI would love to work in a hospital where injuries just healed themselves in double quick time. |
| corkieshome 2007-10-26 ch 8, | abuseWow! Two chapters in one day - Thank you, Thank you! I sense the plot is seriously thickening... keep writing! :0) |
| WingedPegasus 2007-10-26 ch 8, anon. | abuseOh, this is really good. Team whump!! Me likey. I'm getting really creeped out though . . . Oh, one little thing. The sticks Shep and Teyla spar with are called bantos rods, not tonfa sticks. Tonfa sticks look like this: (And no, they aren't called 'twigs of doom' . . .:D) |
| WingedPegasus 2007-10-26 ch 7, anon. | abuseUh-oh . . .Not good. |
| WingedPegasus 2007-10-26 ch 5, anon. | abuseOh good grief, this is CREEPY!! :O |
| samarie 2007-10-23 ch 6, | abuseGreat chapter! like you said- nail biting. I was on the edge of my seat the whole time. I can't wait to see what happens next! |
| skipgunner 2007-10-20 ch 6, | abuseSweet. I got a little worried and I had to keep reminding myself that Shep's telling the story. Well done, indeed! :D |
| janib 2007-10-20 ch 6, | abuseJust read the last 2 chapters. Reminds me of the Haunted House in Disneyland, Paris. Never been so scared in my life! |
| corkieshome 2007-10-19 ch 6, | abuseoh. creeppyy! Hope you will keep going! |