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;_; so...beautiful and totally awesome story!!
So much tension. action and romance. I was sobbing so much during this whole story xD You did an awesome job here and I would love to read more KP-stories from you! Hope you will work on the kiss of scorpion thing soon! Maybe as a little x-mas gift? ^^;

I was really sure that Ron wont make it...but THANKS GOD he did!! even if he had to spent a lot of month with the horrible hospitalfood. *g*
and i thought at first that maybe Drakken will help to heal Ron somehow to show Red that his plan wont work...- but Kim words as a heelingmethod was more romantic ^^
hope the two of them will live happy forever and that Dr. P never find out what the two lovebirds did at one night xD

enough smalltalk...great work! I love your writingstyle!
Mahado

Well this was a while in coming... and a nice nice end to it... couldn't have done it better...


Well done.


kaiokken

Read the whole thing and enjoyed every part of it.Now can't wait for the sequel.

Yay! =D
Happy end,and so one more great story is finished!

That's the way to end this; the tearful confession of love and reasons why, the sudden hopelessness of the sitch, the glorious reunion with the one's we love. All this combined into one great ending of one marvelous story.

At least Kim finally realized just how much of her life would be cold and sterile without the loving gentleness and steadying influence of one; Ron Stoppable.

She should be thankful that he did hear her. Ron, right then, needed Kim like never before and she came through beautifully. It’s amazing what we can and will do for the ones we love.

Bravo, well done. Well done indeed. I await the sequel with anticipation.

Very good ending to this one guy! Kim realized what she is or could have become with Ron in or out of the picture of her life.

Her 'confession' may have kick started Ron's return to the living and the joy of being back rewarded each of them in the end.

See you soon!

CB73

Brilliant ending! Really enjoyed this story, you kept me guessing until the very end. Look forward to your next work.

I have seen a young woman driven to the brink of despair and misery; tortured by the sight of her suffering love at death’s door, and confronted by a man who has no remorse for what he has done. Transform herself into vengeance personified. A hero, who only lived to help others, who gathered all her tremendous abilities and physical gifts and focused them, laser like, unto the cause of all her and her loved ones pain and suffering.

A young woman who took this focus and transformed herself into the perfect warrior,as relentless as an avalanche and as remorseful as a force of nature.

Then I watched as she engaged in an epic battle with one whose very existence is contrary to all she believes in. Even as she battled this perverse reflection of her own abilities she never lost sight of why she was doing this.

And in the end, standing before a vanquished enemy, she kept her focus and turned to thoughts of an injured love and just walked away.

Well done, well done indeed!

Wasn't sure which way that was going to go until the end. Nice chapter, still hoping Ron pulls through; hope to find out soon?

Yep, that was definitely a step up from the prelims of the previous chapter. Must have been very difficult to keep the flow going inside your head until you got it down here. Very intense, brutal and relentless our little Kimmie was this night.

Red Dragon got his butt handed to him as Kim took him apart. His ego and arrogance vs. her love for Ron was Red's undoing as Kim never gave quarter, nor let up for a moment.

Now that Red Dragon's going to lockup and some medical care, Kim needs to get back to Ron. The last scene with him and the Dr's Possible didn't look too good and hoping for the best.

Kim called it: Ron's is a big part of why she is so many things, especially NOT a murderer.

See ya soon?

CajunBear73

Fight for honour... fight for honour...

You could just see the cheer squad in the back ranting for Kim...

Nice story going here man...

I don't know if I have given a review for your story before but here goes:

That is one impressive fight scene you have written here. You can almost feel the body blows rain down on the Red Dragon. The coldness of Kim's beating is palpable, the rage, the helplessness she feels at the terrible wounds Ron suffered for her.

The guilt she confesses to Ron's parents; their loving reply of trust in her. All blend in one heck of a chapter. I don't know how the Red Dragon even went on after those initial hits he took to the crotch like that.

This has to be one of the best examples of Kim Possible just kicking the crap out of an enemy and not caring much for the circumstances that may follow her actions

Well done. I await your next update.

An epic battle, indeed..
Great story!

Kim's been carrying quite a bit of guilt over what she believes is her fault with Ron. She seems to have been looking for someone to transfer the blame onto her or to give her the release she needs to kill Red Dragon and absorb all she feels is her fault.

The Stoppables didn't give her this and instead tried to calm her heart over their son's condition, rightly with the blame going on Red Dragon.

Quite the brutal 'warm-up' in this chapter? Then what follows is gonna be worse?

CB73