great!

I really like this, you did a good job.

*nosebleeds* Wot! That was an awesome twist at the end. Itachi can be so evil at times ne? ^^

LMFAO. Omg... now THAT, I call torture. XD

An artful twist to the story, m'dear! *applauds you*

Heehee. I liked the story. I really liked the ending two paragraohs. I was like, "OMG! Seventy-one more hours of that? Sasuke's screwed." (quite literally thank you.) Anyway, good job.

eh, is this going to be continued and made into a story? I like it as a one-shot but I think it is a great begining to a story! ^^

"...almost to that place, that addictive place he discovered, like everyone else, when he was younger."

I don't think I would have liked this story half as much as I do without this line. A different take on Itachi's version of Sasuke torture - but it works.

... Gah. That was so ... uh ... awesome. :)

thats terrible, the worst kind of torture! D: and Im still waiting for an update on Summer Storm ;_; just to let you know.

Holy crap that was scary. But good.

*tries to stop her nosebleed* Awesome. XD

ooh. really catching!

I want to say that the ending was 'a twist' and 'a surprise' but it's really not, given what we know about these two, and somehow, the story is all the more beautiful for that. It just - it FITS, like there's really no other way for things to happen, and the ABSOLUTE HOTNESS of your story gets this undercurrent of - I dunno - melancholy or, or what-could've-been (except not) and -

Um.

What I'm trying to say: This was very very pretty. I liked it. Thank you.