Yes. That was a utterly, utterly fantastic twist. I really should just put all of your stories under my favorites now, because that's where I'm headed.

Needless to say, attempt achieved.

GREAT STORY! -favs-

so cute! and sad... ]

I'm depressed now...

Nice story though

Aww how sad! I love it! Amazing! Poor thing! I actually feel sorry for Sasuke!

Good work!

sina xx

and here I'd just assumed that Sakura was already married...

So, getting married to Naruto is she? or is this supposed to be a mystery

Alright, so you and your dialogue-fics have quite a skill that I'veneverseen/alwaysavoided before. So yeah, I enjoy it though as sad as it may be.

A little sad, because some of the dialogue was just perfectly portraying their emotions.

...

though, some parts were confusing, because it was a little hard to figure out which line was Sakura's and which was Sasuke's, as you sometimes had Sakura (or Sasuke) speaking twice, but with two different lines and no way of telling that the other had just remained silent.

Such as the ending, from the point where Sasuke said, "Now, Sakura. We leave now." to the end. As I wasn't sure who spoke two of the lines.

and, this line

It never would have been enough. I'd have wanted you it forever. You, forever."

The "I'd have wanted you it forever" makes no sense. Did you mean, I'd have wanted it to go on forever? it to last forever?

i think this is probably one of the saddest, yet sweetest sasuke/sakura stories i've ever read!

great job!

Aw! That was sad, but kinda cute. Great job!

i liked it, but i wish i could've known who the groom was. was it naruto?

Wow...that was really good. And really sad. She was getting married to Naruto, wasn't she? You did really well with the dialogue, btw.

WOW.

Excuse me while I go sulk in a corner now. T-T

dat confused me...so sasukes NOT d groom?if he isnt den i am glad!id rader hav sakura marry sum1 els dan sasuke dan sasuke marry sum1 else dan sakura caz i wa get angry nywys sakuraxkisu was rite, u make good stories hope u rite mo bye!

Hooly shat.

wow.

that was INTENSE!

uh whose the groom?