Hi!
I just caught up on this story and I have to say, I'm really impressed. A lot of FB fanfiction is awkwardly written, but you've managed to really capture the essence of all of the brothers, with their dialogue and actions incredibly believable. You're also really descriptive; as I read, I can see all of this going on in my brain, haha. Great job so far, I'm definitely subscribing and anxiously awaiting the next chapter. Keep it up! :)

Green?

I thought he got shot? How in the hell is he still alive and kicking?

O.o

I must say, this is very well written. I love it! I'm glad you saved Jack!! :)

Yes! Great update. Grr, I don't know what to say, I loved all of it, but another cliff hanger! Ah!

Loving this story, it's amazing! Please update soon :)

Not the suspense! *flails ineffectually* And a cliffhanger to boot! *flails even more ineffectually*

Oh, Jack. Be careful what you ask for. And he's surprised Bobby hit him? He ought to know better than that!

Can't wait for more!

Hey!!
Awesomeness!! Keep writing and please update soon!

I loved the interaction with Jack and Bobby - it's almost like this is Bobby's soft side, or as much as it could be, lol. It's funny how much Jack fears him yet demands that Bobby hits him because he wouldn't "let Angel or Jerry get away with this shit"... and it's really funny when Bobby does. I was kind of surprised that Jack was surprised, but it makes sense. Poor Jack - he can't win for losing, lol.

I love silent Sofi and how she can still find ways to torment Angel even without talking, lol. And good thing Jerry was there to witness it, because God forbid he ever live that down, haha.

Well written, and great cliffhanger. I think you've already told me about this, but I'm foggy on it, so it's still a semi-cliffhanger for me. Can't wait for the next chapter :)

I loved how you started the chapter. "He still couldn’t help thinking there was something else he was missing, though..." LOL!

More LOL moments for me:

""The little guy." "The what?" Bobby narrowed his eyes and Jack coughed loudly, trying to mask a laugh that threatened to escape."

"Jack couldn’t have known that because there was no way in hell he would have forgotten it."

"Jerry had no idea what she was saying, but he was glad he couldn’t hear it."

As always, another great chapter. Nice cliffhanger, too. ^_^

another great chapter. please continue asap! I love it so much! =)

So happy you updated! I love this story! Please update soon! Oh and it's been a long time since I've read this story so I was wondering if you killed Greene in the story. Or should I be freaking out cause he's alive!

“Oh, I know you.” She pointed at him with the hand that wasn’t clutching the towel closed. “The little guy.”

“The what?” Bobby narrowed his eyes and Jack coughed loudly, trying to mask a laugh that threatened to escape.

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PRICELESS.

Another awesome chapter! I can't believe Bobby really punched Jack. D: So good. Keep up the awesome work. ^_^

YEYE FOR UPDATES! =D =]

I loved it when Bobby hit Jack. It seemed so realistic that JAck would not want to get babied, but when he complains to Bobby he gets a smack. Don't mess with the little guy!

Poor Angel. Poor, poor Angel...

awsome!
keep it up:)
not quite as funny as others but w/e

Oh this was gorgeous! hahahah Jolene sounds cool. Way to go Jack! haha Bobby, never thought your baby brother could hook up with a chick like that huh? :p

I loved the little 'you wouldnt let Angel or Jerry get away with it' bit, coz yea he wouldnt! and I guess Jack could've expected Bobby to hit him when he asked for it, that's Bobby Mercer for you right there!

Thank you for making me smile you! :)