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NinjaM 2008-07-01 ch 8,	abuseI think I've fallen in love with this sotry. Its very well written and you keep your readers at the edge of their seat Excellent I am definaly looking forward to future cahpters
sylvrewolfe 2008-06-06 ch 8,	abuseAs always it was a pleasure reading the latest chapter to this wonderfully written piece. A somewhat odd combination of characters, but you've made it work thus far. To be completely honest with you I do the same thing in my writing where I jump around a bit. Usually from one characters perspective to another. So despite said confusion I found myself rather easily able to follow and if I didn't quite get something right away within a few lines I was able to quickly gain insight! As for lemons...well...I don't mind them so long as they are written in a tasteful manner. To be honest I don't particularly care whether or not you want to make it a lemon, I'll keep reading it either way. I leave it up to you, as it is your story. I can wholly understand how you could feel uncomfortable writing lemons as I too find it a bit awkward to write. Do what you feel is best, heck, sometimes your characters will even tell you what they want or need to do. Mine sure have! (No, I'm not crazy! I'm not hearing disembodied voices or anything like that! It's just that my characters have developed strong personalities of their own and though I can force them into odd positions I can't make them do anything they don't want to. I'll be writing sometimes and I'll want to do something and get this feeling that sort of tells me not to write it that way because the character wouldn't do that or something. Get what I mean? Well if you don't I'm sure you will eventually.) Sorry about practically writing a novel here as a review, It's just I've lurked in the shadows here for quite some time reading your pice and others, and now for a brief moment I'm leaving the shadows. By the time you've finished reading my response here i will have stepped back into the shadows once more, but don't worry I may come out once more! I'm looking forward to the next chapter very much! I'm sure it will be excellent as always. ~sylvrewolfe
Belthasar 2008-06-03 ch 8,	abuseI don't really care if you put in any mature content or not. If you're not comfortable writing things like that, then don't.
Farios 2008-06-02 ch 8, anon.	abuse...Wow. Deep ^_^ Thank god you aren't going to abandon this story, I think I'd cry if you did!! :D
SimplyDeep01 2008-05-31 ch 7,	abuseThe kissing scene didnt feel right...it should've come in at a later stage. It was too early and i dont feel that their feelings had enough time to develop
Belthasar 2008-05-26 ch 7,	abusePlease update soon.
Billy Rose 2008-05-16 ch 7,	abuseboo yah, you go Tatsuki! hops around ^_^ rescuing the damsel in distress and getting a kiss in one fell swoop nice ^_^ can't wait for the next chap
Djevel 2008-04-16 ch 7,	abuseI admit, the beginning was a little hard to take in, but the ending was undoubtedly cute. :3 Also, I can't believe I read this before and didn't review. I remember reading this a couple weeks ago when I was looking for TatsukiChizuru fics but I didn't know it was by YOU, of all people. Go figure. XD Good story, keep updating. But why would people think of you as a homophobe for just for portraying them realistically? Lol, doesn't make sense. But don't worry, I don't think of you as one. ;D
Farios 2008-04-06 ch 7, anon.	abuseThoughts, huh? I like it ^^ I like it a lot, in fact. It's not very easy to find a convincing Tatsuki/Chizuru fic in my opinion, but this one is pulling it off pretty well. :)
darkens4841 2008-04-05 ch 7,	abuse-squeals- yay, you're back :D -glomps- Don't worry bout the long wait...I'm not the best updater in the world either, heh. Anyhoo, this was a good chapter. It transitioned smoothly from the last and there was no weirdness that usually comes with a chapter in a story that hasn't been updated in a while. I do hope you can update soon again though ^^
Who Knows 2008-04-05 ch 6, anon.	abuseWow. I love it, fantastic! It really is so hard to find this particular pairing, nevertheless one well written. And ya ok, so they aren't exactly a pair yet but that's great too. Nothing bothers me more than people who have characters get together unrealistically fast, so this story is nice in that respect too. I'm also a real sucker for good angst. The razor scene I admit had me worried at first. I think that if she had gone through with it then it would have been over the top and cliche. But having her considering it but not being able to go through with it made for the perfect balance. So thank you for this fic and please write more, you've earned yourself a new fan.
... 2008-03-28 ch 6, anon.	abuseplease continue
moomala 2008-02-09 ch 6, anon.	abuse:) (I like it.) (sorry that I don't have time to say any more. I'll review again later.) (I like it alot.)
hessan 2008-01-20 ch 6,	abuseHey, you still writing this?
deathcurse 2007-12-23 ch 6, anon.	abuseI've been following this fic even though sometimes I haven't reviewed. I really, really should have, but things have been busy! It has been a bit melodramatic, but not in a bad way. I still really like the fic. More Tatsuki and Chizuru interaction please!!

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