 OutTheBlackDoor 2009-11-02 . chapter 8I demand more god damnit! You are the writer god, got that? YOU HAVE NOT POSTED SINCE THE F*ING SUPER BOWL. GOD. IS. DEAD. (If you don't post more of course.)Please... I'm desperate. |
 blekmedelninjan 2009-06-04 . chapter 8It's a damn shame this is the only ChizuTatsu fic worth mentioning here at .
It's a good, solid fic, and you write well enough. My only complaints would be the off-the-charts levels of angst and sadness, but it works.
Keep updating, and I will keep reviewing. |
 H4K7 2008-12-10 . chapter 8I really like this fic so far, you're doing a great job. There aren't that many Chizuru fics, so its always nice to find a good one like this. |
 Zenn1 2008-12-10 . chapter 8It certainly has been a while, huh? Funny thing is I was just going through my watch list to see if I should cut some dead stories. Now I'm glad I didn't. This story had me hooked from the first chapter so I do hope you don't leave us in the cold again. |
 Kitty Petro 2008-10-05 . chapter 7Really like this fic so far, keep the chapters comming |
 saddas 2008-08-18 . chapter 7i really like this story (big yuri fic fan) i wouldn't mind some mature content, and i hope there's a happy ending (I'm a sucker for a happy ending) |
 NinjaM 2008-07-01 . chapter 8I think I've fallen in love with this sotry. Its very well written and you keep your readers at the edge of their seat Excellent I am definaly looking forward to future cahpters |
 sylvrewolfe 2008-06-06 . chapter 8As always it was a pleasure reading the latest chapter to this wonderfully written piece. A somewhat odd combination of characters, but you've made it work thus far. To be completely honest with you I do the same thing in my writing where I jump around a bit. Usually from one characters perspective to another. So despite said confusion I found myself rather easily able to follow and if I didn't quite get something right away within a few lines I was able to quickly gain insight! As for lemons...well...I don't mind them so long as they are written in a tasteful manner. To be honest I don't particularly care whether or not you want to make it a lemon, I'll keep reading it either way. I leave it up to you, as it is your story. I can wholly understand how you could feel uncomfortable writing lemons as I too find it a bit awkward to write. Do what you feel is best, heck, sometimes your characters will even tell you what they want or need to do. Mine sure have! (No, I'm not crazy! I'm not hearing disembodied voices or anything like that! It's just that my characters have developed strong personalities of their own and though I can force them into odd positions I can't make them do anything they don't want to. I'll be writing sometimes and I'll want to do something and get this feeling that sort of tells me not to write it that way because the character wouldn't do that or something. Get what I mean? Well if you don't I'm sure you will eventually.) Sorry about practically writing a novel here as a review, It's just I've lurked in the shadows here for quite some time reading your pice and others, and now for a brief moment I'm leaving the shadows. By the time you've finished reading my response here i will have stepped back into the shadows once more, but don't worry I may come out once more! I'm looking forward to the next chapter very much! I'm sure it will be excellent as always.
~sylvrewolfe |
 Belthasar 2008-06-03 . chapter 8I don't really care if you put in any mature content or not. If you're not comfortable writing things like that, then don't. |
 Farios 2008-06-02 . chapter 8 ...Wow. Deep ^_^
Thank god you aren't going to abandon this story, I think I'd cry if you did!! :D |
 SimplyDeep01 2008-05-31 . chapter 7The kissing scene didnt feel right...it should've come in at a later stage. It was too early and i dont feel that their feelings had enough time to develop |
 Belthasar 2008-05-26 . chapter 7Please update soon. |
 Billy Rose 2008-05-16 . chapter 7boo yah, you go Tatsuki!
*hops around* ^_^
rescuing the damsel in distress and getting a kiss in one fell swoop
nice ^_^
can't wait for the next chap |
 hyungie 2008-04-16 . chapter 7I admit, the beginning was a little hard to take in, but the ending was undoubtedly cute. :3
Also, I can't believe I read this before and didn't review. I remember reading this a couple weeks ago when I was looking for TatsukiChizuru fics but I didn't know it was by YOU, of all people. Go figure. XD
Good story, keep updating. But why would people think of you as a homophobe for just for portraying them realistically? Lol, doesn't make sense. But don't worry, I don't think of you as one. ;D |
 Farios 2008-04-06 . chapter 7 Thoughts, huh? I like it ^^ I like it a lot, in fact. It's not very easy to find a convincing Tatsuki/Chizuru fic in my opinion, but this one is pulling it off pretty well. :) |