Reviews for The Other Side of Your Heart

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JesusRox7111 2008-09-21 ch 1,	abusetoo bad he lost :( Again, I liked this one, too, (not a surprise:) At first, I didn't get where the parenthesis came from (I'm slow like that:P) But, it didn't take me too long to realize. nice one-shot:)
Ocianne 2008-05-08 ch 1,	abuseThat... was really, really REALLY good. I don't usually read KH fic (write is a whole 'nother story, of course), but this caught my attention and I'm very glad I found it. The juxtaposition between truth and lie, Sora and Roxas, Other vs other... You pulled it off beautifully. It even seems to fit within canon. I am definitely going to keep this in the back of my mind when I play the game again. Well done. :) Ocianne
Frenzied Flame 2008-03-17 ch 1,	abuseThis was very good... interesting!
Ptoras 2008-03-16 ch 1,	abuseThat was confusing, but at the same time it made perfect sense. Great job! I liked how Roxas' thoughts are in parentheses and we can see what he's thinking while Sora is completely oblivious. This is a different type of writing!
Faye Silo 2008-01-24 ch 1,	abusemer O-O that was a good one. Love, Faye Silo
kawaiigami 2008-01-12 ch 1,	abuseI like the style--how each passage follows a pattern and leads up to the end. You do a good job getting into the character's heads, too. Though I thought Sora knew Axel's name during that last fight in Betwixt and Between.
SilverInkblot 2008-01-11 ch 1,	abuseDude, that last line is a piece of genius. Freaking awesome. This is a great way to write out their characters, and I for one appreciate that the focus was on Roxas and Sora's connection instead of Roxas and Axel's lost relationship. Very nice.
mirai3k 2007-12-26 ch 1,	abuseYOU KILLED ME! AGAIN AND AGAIN AND AGAIN! GOD! but yes, to be semi-coherent now, this is EXACTLY what I was trying to find worded exactly the way you worded and and gah you just did it and hit it right on, SO, so spot on, the whole Sora-and-Roxas intrapsychic tension and just left me gaping and dying inside because this is too too perfect to deserve a completely coherent review. -- The truth is he doesn’t know where the tears come from. The lie is someone else is screaming for everything he knows and wants back. (that part of the game killed me. And I'm not done the game but I know how things go and I'm sure Axel dying will kill me much more. SIGH) -- "I never asked to be //you//* you just plain rock.
EllipsisAddict 2007-11-18 ch 1,	abuseWow... this was great - especially all the parts in the parantheses. Poor Roxas.
kuriqa 2007-11-14 ch 1,	abusedude! this is awesome! course now when i play thru the games i'm going to be thinking of this and wondering what roxy is probly thinking... k
Lainey Anime15 2007-11-12 ch 1,	abuseAnother amazing story, I feel so bad for Roxas. I almost cried the first time I saw the anger when Axel died. And the "Why did he choose you", you capture the events preceding to this perfectly. I felt that same tug on my heart as I did in the actual game!
Windsong 2007-11-09 ch 1,	abuseYou managed to capture such a desperate, ringing intensity and keep it throughout the entire fic. This one pulled at my heartstrings and...have I ever mentioned that I hate your ability to end stories properly? The parentheses were used to marvelous effect and the truth/lie things were very thought-provoking. There were one or two lines that I felt stumbled just a hair--specifically the line where Roxas "screams his denials furiously..." I don't know, something about the rhythm of it. Maybe it's too long? I'm sorry I can't be more specific. And, um, I do actually read every single one of your fics...I just don't review them all. Sorry. Eventually I'll get around to the ones I skipped over, I swear @_@ &heart;! Keep writing~
Lil Tanuki 2007-11-02 ch 1,	abuseI like how this was written, the short scenes with Roxax's even shorter dialogue. Roxas comments were angrier and growing in frustration with every scene, it perfectly led up to his appearance in the end. That last line "I nevr asked to be /you/" ! It swept me off my feet and went for the kill! It's always the very end of a story that stays with me. I love it when it leaves a feeling of tying the story together at the end. Um, am I making sense? Well, this story did that for me. 0nce again, great job.
tanyart 2007-11-01 ch 1,	abuseI love how you wrote it in little flash scenes, along Roxas' inserts... just wow. Thanks for the read!
darkmouse jumu 2007-10-27 ch 1,	abuseDude, this is awesome. I've got such a writer-fetish for the style you used to convey this idea (with the intermittent parenthetical phrases) of two sides of the same coin at war with each other. Weird, but I wonder how this "looked" before it took shape in letters and words. I adore the climactic ending, one last challenge from Roxas. Lovely work as always - it's always a treat when you run with a plot bunny. :D

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