m kay, i know this was only a one shot but... i RLY loved this story and i would love u 4 EVER if u wrote an epilogue!

...Oh **. Totally didn't expect THAT, that's for sure.

Good, though. Well written.

Omg...this is such an amazing story great job. I absolutely loved it I couldn't stop myself from crying. Im still in shock I think but god it's such a moving story once again I just want to say that you did an amazing job.

My gosh that was...unexpected, depressing, and utterly amazing. usually, I am not a fan of actually reading angst (writing, well, that's another story). This, however, was just...haunting, for lack of a better word. Granted, now I ened to find something fluffy, but this was well worth it. Wonderful job!

0_o

Okay, so I thought that for a split sec...Wait, why would Casey be blacking out, if Derek saved her...Just did not compute.

But Im like Naw...

And then at the end you shoulda saw my face. It went from the Derek illusion part:

=/

To the HE WAS THERE.

:D

To her looking at her:

=O

lol. Yeah, awesome job, you had me going through a lot of emotions,and OMG,

i just thought of another thing.

Casey wasnt going through the photobook in real life. some weird coma thing.

Or wait. Was that what you were thinking? lol

I love it, this fic totally had me thinking. I need more of that. lol

That was amazing. Only thing that I can say is that I would've left it after "still focused" to give it a different feel. I dunno, it just seems like it would've made it slightly better, not that it wasn't already. Seriously, I absolutely loved it! No joke! I usually hate it when one of the kids die in a fic, but you wrote this so amazingly that I can't! Great job and looking forward to new fics in the future...

It's so sad but so beautiful! VERY GOOD JOB!

loved it update soon

brillant story. great twist.

You got me. You got me so good. Why didn't I see that coming?
Br. But yeah, that was great. And I love the Cure. :-)

Brilliant twist at the end. And thoroughly depressing as well. Nice job!

--MM

omg, that was excellent. I really believed at first that Derek was the one who died, but then when it as Casey it was like woah. i loved it! your a good writer

Wow! That was incredible. I loved this story. You've definitely got quite a twist in this story though. Casey - the ghost. Intersting concept. Good luck.

Keri, Keri, Keri. That was absolutely amazing. I loved it. I don't think it could have been any better. Thanks again for taking part in the challenge. I'm saving this to my favourites. ;)

Allie

Dude, Amazing. You should def. keep writing. (:



-Daseyfan76