I have been reading, and I like this, and the two before... Though at first, I thought the Prince was just starting to crack. Also, Jericho can so easily turn THAT, you know what, back on Naomi... Though he seem more of lusting than loving. But I never had... well... Anyhow I will read more! Keep up on the good work!

. . . How the hell is Princey-boy going to get out of prison?! Are they going to try and kill him? If so. . . Serves him right. Prince & Dark Prince- "What?! What the hell is wrong with you, Nightmare?!" You hurt Naomi, you keep dying while I'm playing the stupid game . . . Dark Prince- "That's your fault!!" . . . No it isn't. It's your stupidity! *Runs.*

I died reading that. . . *Tears.* Why do you people make me cry?! Prince- "Big baby. . ." You're son was just dropped from a VERY high place, bastard! Prince- *Glares.*

D: Whose baby is it?! Wait, I'll find out, so I might as well shut it . . .

Morning sickness. . . It is, isn't it?!

Yes! They're together again! *Cackles with fangirl glee.* Uh, yeah. *Sweat drop.*

Am I allowed to kick Jericho's ass for keeping something like that from Naomi?! . . . Probably not.

O_o Wow. People really like Dark Princey, don't they . . . Anyway. . . Would it be allowed for Jericho and Naomi to be in love since Jericho is half human?

D: ! . . . I really hate Dalila right now.

SQUEE! ^_^ I love you!! You named Princey-boy over here after my brother Sora! Sora & . . . 'Sora'- 0_0 "You scare me, Nightmare." And yes, KH Sora is my brother!

Whoa, I really like this story series! I especially like how there are so many things going on in this story! Poor Edan! :'( It seemed so promising with that child ... *sob* I love the way you've made the Dark Prince, however, and Aaron! They are both cool, and I can't wait to read the next story, whatever you have decided to call it! But I am going to kill you for that cliffhanger. (whiny voice) I mean, come on! XD

Strange ending, I didn't suspected this :) Anyway The story was fun (something really new, not just "going trough the game"), and I will wait for next part.

Nice story. From light and funny beginning trough deeper and deeper plot, few unexpected twists... (mistletoe ^^) to darker ending... but theres always hope :)

Hope it will have a happy end (I like those old plain happy endings, not those "full of depth" that make me angry...^^

PS. Sorry for any grammar/spelling errors.

omg india! hooray for india and indians! :P can't wait to see what happens there... will she meet farah? dun dun dun!

Just great :) And... well... if is it going to have an happy end, please lets the prince end with Naomi, Farah is a nice girl and surely will find someone else :P

Girl, you sure like your cliffhangers don't you?
Not that I mind, but, if you don't mind my constructive criticism, you know what they say about too many cooks.
But other than that, I really enjoyed reading this chapter

;p