|Reviews for Cave In|
| ShadowoftheblackrOsE 2/27/12 . chapter 10
Ah! Your first post! How incredibly adorable. Yes- a little unbelievable,but hey- there has to be a few. But don't think that I didn't enjoy it, because I did(: Now I am off to review more of your wonderful work...as I said before:P
| TheTruthIsInsideOfYou 1/28/12 . chapter 10
Out of all your stories this one is my favorite. That said, however, it does get a little confusing as sometimes it seems like scenes blend together or don't flow as they should. Especially in between the morgue and the trace sample and when Sara is trying to wake Catherine up in the beginning.
| Suzi 2/1/10 . chapter 9
Just to say you're an amazing writer and I've enjoyed all your stories. Thankyou!
| angelimmortal 12/2/08 . chapter 10
I loved it! Thank you for writing.
| daysofinspiration 11/26/08 . chapter 10
Aw, what a cute ending. Old Sara vs New Sara. I like that idea. It was really good.
I think the idea of a sequel, in which they find out who caused the cave-in, would be a good idea. Because, I mean yes, the person tried to kill them. But the person also kinda deserves a thank you, because they are the reason Cath and Sara are together. So a sequel would allow them so say thank you, and you know, arrest them! :p But not until some of your other stories wrap up, so maybe sometime in the not-so-distant future.
Very very very cute story. I loved it.
- Bubbles ]
| daysofinspiration 11/25/08 . chapter 9
Wow, those two are really broken. Cath as one leg in a full cast? Wow. Neither of them will be at work for quite a while. But I guess that will leave them with some quality bonding time, and time with Lindsey. We need quality bonding between Sara and Lindsey.
Poor Griss. You do end up feeling bad for him...kinda. But it is his fault. He said no to both of them, so now he just has to learn how to deal.
Oh, and Nick walking in on them kidding, priceless moment.
| daysofinspiration 11/24/08 . chapter 8
They got out! They got out! They got out! See, I even made a song for it. They got out, they got out, they got out! I’m so happy they got out. And they’re going with option D, which was obviously the best one. Woot!
I also liked how you added Sara’s self-doubt. That was very realistic, Sara thinking that she isn’t good enough for Cath. And I think Catherine said just the right things to make her feel better.
They got out! Now all we need is to figure out who tried to kill them in the first place.
| daysofinspiration 11/23/08 . chapter 7
Catherine and Grissom? While Cath was still married? Lindsey was almost his? Wow. That’s a lot to take in.
I actually really liked the background story. It gave us more information about the characters without just simply stating it. You let the characters tell it. And it brought us away from the fact that they are still trapped in the cave. When are they going to get out of the cave!
Aqua Bubbles ]
| daysofinspiration 11/22/08 . chapter 6
Sorry for the break in reviews, my computer had a small melt-down. But now we’re both back in business and ready to keep reviewing. (Yes, my computer is just as interested in this story as I am :p )
Aww that’s so sad. Cath is so efficient in getting her work not to conflict with Lindsey that no one would even notice she’s gone.
Sara’s parents are evil. Sara and Cath are having a perfectly good moment, and then it goes and gets ruined because of what her parents did to her as a child. Locking her in the crawlspace? That’s just horrible. It’s no wonder she doesn’t like the dark.
Um, I expected Sara to say she was in love with him once, but Catherine? Now you’ve got me interested.
| daysofinspiration 11/13/08 . chapter 5
How long are you going to keep them locked up in there? Huh? When do we get to see Sara’s heroics at rescuing Catherine, the damsel, first from escaping the cave, and then defending her from their suspect?
And I totally agree with them by the way. It’s very lame to try and kill them the same way they killed the vic, especially since they didn’t assure that the girls would die. Their killer most definitely lost points on originality. I hope they catch the killer once they get out.
You had some really funny lines in this chapter. I find it ironic that they are trapped with no way to get out, and yet they are joking with each other. I guess they are trying to stay positive. I loved the brain damage line, that was hilarious. “I have a headache.” “That’s what happens when you run your head into a giant rock. Twice.” “I’m glad you can joke about my potential brain damage.”
| daysofinspiration 11/12/08 . chapter 4
Aww, Sara is so heroic. Not caring about herself; all she wants is for Cath to be okay. This actually was very true to character for her; very selfless. In her mind, Catherine getting out was more important than getting herself out. And I think it is this that Catherine is drawn to. God they are so cute together!
But the question still remains, who caused the cave-in?
| daysofinspiration 11/11/08 . chapter 3
An unmarked mine? And Cath thinks it’s a good idea to go inside? Did Sara whack her over the head with something when we weren’t looking? Seriously Cath, you are just asking for trouble.
Where’s your sense to adventure?” “Hiding right behind my common sense and better judgment.” That was nice. I loved that.
Cath has just woken up from being knocked out…and Sara kisses her? Um, okay. Not exactly what a sane person would have done. You know, check for wounds, blood, that stuff, that might be the sane person’s first response. But then again Sara is in Cath’s presence, so she’s bound to act a little off from normal. And vice versa; that must be why Cath thinks going into the unmarked mine is a good idea, because Sara’s very presence is making her act crazy!
Aqua Bubbles ]
| daysofinspiration 11/10/08 . chapter 2
Aww, Cath feels bad. I like the apology, that’s a positive step for Catherine. But I agree with Sara, good luck with trying not to lose her temper so much. I love that Cath’s trying though, it’s cute. It will be hard be hard, but it’s cute.
The plot thickens. Who moved the body?
| daysofinspiration 11/9/08 . chapter 1
So, since I ran out of chapters to review/annoy you with for Journey of a Lifetime, and since its coming to an end, I figured that I should read some of your other fics that I haven’t read. (I was so transfixed with Journey, that I didn’t even look and see if you had any other fics. It’s that good of a story! Seriously!)
Anyways…very good question. Why is Cath’s first reaction always defense? Heck, why is Sara’s first reaction defense? Why is it that these two don’t get along? Can’t they see that they really and truly love each other?
Now, let’s analyze the plot so far, shall we? They are out in the middle of nowhere, investigating some dead body. I can already see the possibilities for disaster…
And sparkly dust? Why is the body covered in sparkly dust?
| Sapphonest 7/2/08 . chapter 10
This is pure awesomeness.
I think you did an amazing job. I certainly wouldn't mind waking up with Sara Sidle's lips on mine, either.
Two thumbs dangerously geek-level up!