*fav* it great story!

Let's just hope this doesn't turn out the wrong way.

Exactly what I said, troubles coming up...

Oh, boy, this isn't good at all! I hope you don't mind I'm reviewing like this, but I do think your Magnum PI stories deserves more credits that are actually getting I love them!

Thomas is getting himself into troubles again...

I loved the two last sentences of his thoughts just like in the show. Perfect.

I don't know why I had the feeling Pierce was a friend of Robin Masters...

What did Jessie leave for Hawaii? Is she still there?

Just finished reading all 7 Chapters. Very nice. I especially loved the use of Magnum's signature "I know what you're thinking..." Rick's voice was dead-on throughout. What drew me to this piece was Hawkeye AND Magnum, two of my favorite men in television history. I found Pierce subdued, but understandably so.

Very nicely done.

MA

It's always a treat to find one of your fics posted here and this one is no exception.

A wonderfull, upbeat story with s hint of something more to come perhaps?

I must confess that you did have me worried that something would go wrong during the sting, it never seems to go as Magnum and Rick plan when they set up somthing like that :)

More please?

Great story! Happy writing!

is this a repost of a story?...cuz i thought i had reviewed it before. anyway, i hope you continue to update this!

Aww man...He isn't Radar...or could he be? Anywho its a great start! Looking forward to more, especially some old MASH faces...Happy writing!