 Helencsi 1/5/08 . chapter 3I love Elle i was soo sad wen she left so ur sdtory is realli good |
 Sammy Elle 11/5/07 . chapter 2Great update! Sorry that it took me so long to review... |
 starryeyes10 10/26/07 . chapter 2great story. |
 jadedragon500 10/24/07 . chapter 2Once again, you know what I feel. Here's the love I promised! Love! |
 TutorGirlml 10/12/07 . chapter 1Just wanted to let you know that I think you've got a great story idea and have done a good job getting it started. I've never particularly considered Hotch having romantic feelings towards Elle, but I think they are very similar in the way they handle their emotions in general and the way they do their jobs. I think on the show they tended to have a lot of respect for each other, and I think he was very affected by what happened to her and her leaving the team. You've done a good job portraying that, and it's something that I like to see explored in fan fic, because the show just quit mentioning her pretty much. Anyway, sorry to ramble, but keep up the good work :) |
 jadedragon500 10/10/07 . chapter 1Nice job so far! A couple of grammatical errors but nothing major. Kinda short, but sometimes that happens. All in all, good job. Keep up the good work and I will try to keep up reading! |
 tearbos 10/9/07 . chapter 1Ok, so I'm not an Elle/Hotch fan, but I liked the start of this anyway. The idea of Elle as a victim in their case is interesting.
I'll look for the next chapter. |
 Megsq 10/9/07 . chapter 1 I love Elle/Hotch fics, this is great so far, please continue! |
 Sammy Elle 10/9/07 . chapter 1Well, this was a good start (especially considering your age), however I hope you are going to update soon! |