This is great I think you capptured Grawp very well. His understanding of things. It`s very cute.The last three santences made me cry.

you put Albus,Forest this does not make since it shouold be Albus and Forest so that the whole sentence makes sence other wise this is great. By the way I like that you put Luna in their J.K never mention her but I think that Luna would have found some way to get in there.

Wow, I really like this. You wrote flawlessly in the way Grawp would think, as well as speak. I also thanks you for creating the accompaning translation. Without it, some of the words would have been rather hard to understand. (Not meaning to insult you, it is just Grawp is hard to understand sometimes.)

I envy your talent, and hope to see more form you!

~polariod

As strange as it was it was fitting and good. I'm impressed.

I actually really enjoyed this. I'm a guy trying to secure his masculinity, so I won't say it was "cute" or "adorable", lol, but certainly amusing. I'll retract minor comments that are basically just me being picky, but I believe you handled Grawp's character very well.

aww that's so cute

I really like the last three lines! It's really cute! I love it! It's nice seeing something different for once. lolz. good job!

much luv,
-grl4peace
:P

Aww, its so cute! And so very Grawp-y.

Aw...that was so sweet. I love how you made him so innocent. It actually fits really well with his character. Great job!

This is really nice, I love how Grawp related everything to his limited knowledge of the world...I really like the way you portray him

It Grawp not Gwarp.

-reviews again-
This is the first Grawp fic I've ever read :)
It's still wonderful the second time I read it. xD
Very original & creative - we now finally know how Grawp (perhaps other giants as well?) think. :)
Cheers!
a.N

I love it!

really cute story! i loved when gwarp made his own colors.

Oh that is so cute, i adore this piece of literature!! Oh Grawp is so so so i don't know, Gramp? Thanks for writing this piece! DF