Aw I really love this story =3 it makes me laugh as well at some points xD You're really good at describing it through the horse's eyes and using weird terms for things he doesn't understand xD but I'd be careful with spellchecker in case of silly mistakes or spelling errors, I spotted a few typos around the place. Keep up the good work though!
~Blackie

nice. i like it. update soon

Dude this is awesome so PLEASE keep writing.

good plot
what horse runs into a fence?haha
i liked that part
humor is a good thing for your wirting

Hehehe this is really adorable! I love River, he makes me laugh so hard. I will be waiting excitedly for more! :D

wow this is really good i hope you update soon

i like

Not bad, i love it write some more please

Nice so far. Update soon! I'm keeping my eye on this one *glues eyes to screen*

I like Sky. lol. He has freckles!