we don't have IHOP or waffle house in the UK but i always found a large big mac meal with a strawberry shake works (i dunno bout making you sober, its a god send as far as the hangover is concerned though) great story.

Great sequel to a great original story. I had read the first one a while ago but just got a chance to read this. Yes I had tears in my eyes at the end. But you did a helleva job.

aw Grissom Died fab ending though sob

you are SO lucky I already knew about June dying

o *hug* you're forgiven for mow...

What the fucking fuck? is one chapter without angst too much to ask from you?!?!?!?!?!?!?! *throws a spoon at you*

WTFKING FUCK ARE YOU DOING TO MY MENTAL IMAGE OF MY NICE HAPPY FAMILY!?!?!?!?! AND NOW i HAVE TO GO TO BED! SO i CAN'T SEE IT RESOLVED! I HATE YOOU!

(p.s. it's still awesome no matter how much I hate you and want you to burn...)

you suck ass... WTF are you allergic to happiness?

I fucking hate you douche bag! I don't know why I'm putting myself through this, hateyouhateyouhateyouhateyou(this is awesome btw)buthateyouhateyouhateyou

Hi,
I have just finished this and it was brilliant, but you did make me cry.
love the grandkids name and the fact that AJ now works for the lab.
Cant wait to read more from you.
AKE:D

Well, I laughed, I cried, and I arrived at the end satisfied. This was one heckuva story and I really enjoyed it. Thanks for everything. You did a fantastic job, and I loved every minute I spent reading it (okay, so I loved the overall story, maybe every minute is a bit exaggerating). :) Thank you, thank you, thank you, for writing my favorite story, hands down.

I'm speechless.

Aw, a semi-happy chappie. For once.
I liked this one. Good job.
Btw, I got a full-time job which sucked all the fun out of my life. So I'm sorry for the not leaving good reviews. This is the first time I've been on this site in weeks.

Okay, so I totally dig my credit in this last bit here. Really sweet. lol

The story was cool. Even though you know I disagree with you on some parts, because we're always going to disagree about stupid crap, I still liked it.

Everyone likes to think that they're going to have that family that is so nice and neat, polished up just right for everyone to see and resemble when they start their own; it's funny that this was anti-dream. It was nice that it was actually pretty damn realistic, too... at least for were I'm from. There's always kids telling their parents to shove off. I was at this kid's house when he stole his mom's car. He was 9...and got his ass fucking beat. Anyway, the point is that you didn't go beyond the realms of possibility/ probability, and the people that realize that really appreciate it, or should, anyway.

I'll call sometime, but I'm seriously not writing more reviews because 1) I don't want to, and 2)I have to go to the doctor and don't have time.

Later, fuckstick

-me

that was a good ending.. it makes up for you killing grissom.. i loved the story..