wow.. so smart and artistic

honestlt i used to hate Akaba and Koutaro's sort of like Taki.. hehe: annoying yet fun

but this gives a whole new meaning for the characters

great work!
Ya-Ha!

Ohh...wow...

This is really an excellent piece of fic I've ever have the pleasure of reading. You totally projected both players of the Bando Spiders's personality.

Just reading it has given me a much better insight of the two, who are at total odds in other things, yet in sync when it comes to football.

Looking forward to more stories from you. Ya-Ha

Hah ha ha...God this is the funniest thing I've read in a long time, you've characterised Koutaro and Akaba perfectly. I really love your way of writing. Look forward to more of your works!