great story i loved it keep up teh good work.

*sniff* Omg! that was sooo sad! Gohan is really very sweet. Yet in most o' the ficcies I've read, he ends up haveing Goten, Pan, or Videl took away from him :(

Awwww... Bra and Goten are just so cute!

I like it!

Umm...... Okay.

great story!!! i personally loved it. the chapter at the top it is just the one I clicked on but i read the whole story

oh my god that was a really good story. i hate the way it all of a sudden ended. but hopefully there is a sequal. i demand a sequal soon. Please with a cherry on top. pretty pretty please. oh well i will just have to keep bugging you.

GREAT!It is goin onn my favs

that was a long but a very good story. Hope you write more t/p stories also g/b. I love those couples!!!

i will read this later not enought ime but it looks good so far.

no ther should bemore i eman what about meep what about is it a boy or a girl whatabout bra and goten don't they have a child what about marron doesn't she get together with ubuu or something oh come on this can't eb the end write a sequal and e-mail it you me at SaSay2@aol.com : )

This was cool. It will def be on my favs

Ahhh.. i read the entire thing. pretty spiffy!

that was a very good story it could've had a better ending though but hey it's ur story do what ever ya want with it but it was very good :)

great story!!!! it was so....captivating, i guess u could say ^-^', i loved it! Write more!!


~Lyta Son~