This is one of my all time favorite Star Trek eps of any kind of any are and you have done it justice with this fan fic. Lorian is a wonderful character and he didn't get enough time with Trip, IMO. Thank you for this.
E2 was probably my least favourite episode, so I was tempted to skip this fic. I decided to glance at it because it was short, and I can't say I didn't like it. Well-done.