A civilisation of sea monsters, eh? Speaking as someone who's almost phobic about the ocean and everything in it I can say I found them a lot scarier than the Decepticons. The jets' inept attempts to rescue Starscream made me smile. The first story felt a bit incomplete, but this is perfect.

One thing you can always say about Starscream: he always knows how to make an entrance and something is always burned out and miserable at his exits.

On one had, I pity the Shawsheen. On the other hand, they kinda deserved it, if their extinction was by their own hand ...

funny... desturbing but funny!!

Zen-hugzz

...Ah, I read the other fic thinking it was this one. Hm... Hehhehe... He was stuck in a fish for a REALLY LONG time. XD XD XD

I loved the first one, and I'm glad you did decide to write a sequel, I loved it as much as the first! Poor Starscream though, gotta feel sorry for him. :)

i rather liked the sequel. The first one had a hanging ending so this was a perfect ending. Poor, poor starsceam. They're probably going to rebuild him into a streetcleaner. te he :3