 herongale 2009-05-08 . chapter 1I like how the title of this fic kind of tells the whole story... if you know German. I don't, so I had to look the word up, and when I did I got a nice little grin out of it.
At this risk of Starscream hunting me down and destroying most of Michigan in the process, I have to confess that I found this story hilarious. I love how Starscream's contempt for Megatron is almost the first thing to come online: a contempt which of course comes hand in hand with obsessive preoccupation (as further evidenced by the fact that Megatron was the name he shouted most the night before).
The reference to Dreadmoon is nice; it is a good tie-in to your other fic, "The Beating of Leaden-Feathered Wings." I love it when writers apply certain continuities of affection across stories: it is helpful for keeping track of who likes whom (and it nicely reinforces your pairings preferences).
The best part of this story is how you take some very traditional tropes of hangover-fic and turn them over on their head. Partially this is done through simple translation: a Cybertronian hangover is simply not the same thing as a human one. But also filtering it through Starscream's particular brand of frustration and constantly sublimated fury helps to localize it and make it specific. The point is not "Decepticons can have hangovers, tee hee" but "This is Starscream's hangover, see how he copes."
And of course, he comes off as coping quite well, all things considered. That Tidearrow is obviously a twerp and needed to die. |
 tomorrow4eva 2008-04-05 . chapter 1Okay... I'm not sure whether to laugh or be appalled. Probably both? Let this stand as a reason of why not to get overcharged. :) |
 Fire From Above 2008-01-28 . chapter 1That was hilarious. Maybe he shouldn't drink so much. |
 Maraluch 2008-01-26 . chapter 1*cough* Whoa buddy... that was um...err... I mean.. uh.. seriously f'ed up. BUT sOO Funny!
I can't breathe I'm laughing so freaking hard!
~bows to your comedy writing prowess~ |
 ShiTiger 2007-11-02 . chapter 1Loved this one! I'm betting the other name was Skyfire. Great fic! |
 Achilles Maiden 2007-10-18 . chapter 1mwahaha starscream is the decepticon's personal pimp XD. wonder what he does with megatron? XD seriosuly though, awesome story! |
 "Stripperella" 2007-10-10 . chapter 1 Koi! You should come with a great, big warning label!
I'd say that you have a gift of words, but "gift" pales horribly in comparison to the way you bless the english language. |
 Acid 2007-10-09 . chapter 1 I was hoping/thinking he'd wake up inside the fish, but I think this was better. XD |
 TJ 2007-10-09 . chapter 1 Hillarious! 'Morning after stories' are obviously something that this fandom lacks if they can be this good. |
 OptimusxElita4ever 2007-10-09 . chapter 1Wanna know what my first thought was when the "Nyae!" started? I actually thought Starscream gave birth to a child in the middle of the night! Well, shows how weird my imagination can get sometimes. ;P. Anyways, cya! |
 GreendEATHpop 2007-10-09 . chapter 1Hahaha, that was great. My husband just asked why I was grinning like an idiot at the screen.
I love your stories. |