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| SilverTonguePrincess 2007-11-27 ch 6, anon. | abuseomg! this is so good! i wanna know what happens next. update soon please!! |
| Jen . 2007-11-04 ch 3, anon. | abuseholy crap that was dramatic!! lol! got to carry on reading! |
| LarvaxMiyu31 2007-10-26 ch 6, | abuseO I so get the ending lolz nice! "I wonder what's gonna happen next lolz" Wondering maybe she'll have twins! that would be cool! |
| MsLCloud 2007-10-24 ch 6, | abuseYay!! Naruto finally realizing Hinata likes him and he likes her. |
| LarvaxMiyu31 2007-10-21 ch 5, | abusenice! Though I felt bad for Lee... But huray for sakura |
| MsLCloud 2007-10-19 ch 5, | abusehow bad is this? i only felt bad for Lee?!! |
| sakura-lizzy 2007-10-18 ch 4, | abuseOMG!! i cant wait for the nexyt one ^_^ |
| jeje-chan 2007-10-11 ch 4, | abuseTenten's gone senile... Who cares? I've always hated her from the beginning anyway. I mean, who wears a pink shirt with violet trousers? That's just stupid... And if you ever wear that kind of color combination, forgive my rude comment. It's only meant for tenten. Jeje-chan. |
| Jenai-the one who loves 2007-10-11 ch 4, | abuseit's a cool story, and i like it because instead of pairing tenten off with lee (which bugs me so much) you wrote a sort of realistic reaction, except for the violent bit, but then i still liked it anyhoos update soon jenai |
| LarvaxMiyu31 2007-10-11 ch 4, | abuseOh tenten get over it! You should go with lee anyway lolz nice chapter Tres bien! |
| LarvaxMiyu31 2007-10-10 ch 2, | abuseoh please write more this was just getting super awesome! Please keep writing! |
| Nozomichi 2007-10-09 ch 2, | abuseweehoo! im the second one to review. i really do wanna see what everyone else thinks. maybe drag it out a little more than you did with this chapter. it did feel a little hurried. ^.^ good job mate. ja 'ne! |
| MsLCloud 2007-10-09 ch 1, | abuseif i ever saw Neji in just a towel i'd probably die of massive blood loss.loli wouldn't mind reading about the reactions of the others.it was fast paced but to the point.ya know. |