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LiQuYu
2008-01-09 . chapter 1
So it's a weekend long hide and seek... that would be interesting to attempt something like that in real life. And I do think Niou should get a medal for tricking Fuji and Oshiteri Tricking two tensais isn't easy but then again, Niou is THE Trickster. So what was the other way of solving the second clue? Wow, 50 already? I'll be looking forward to your 100th one. ^^
The Night Owl is Addicted
2007-12-21 . chapter 1
hi! i just managed to stumble upon this little oneshot while randomly methodically scanning the 'pages' in ffdotnet and found this title!

And i must say...That was a very fun read! cute too!

hm... i wonder... what IS the easier and slightly more obvious solution? please humor my quite slow mind and give me an answer, ne? please -puppydog eyes-

and it was so cool that Niou managed to trick Oshitari AND Fuji! sugee!
Mrs Hatake Itachi
2007-10-30 . chapter 1
Nice!
Adelle-chan
2007-10-14 . chapter 1
I was debating if I should or should not submit a review to you, but I did. ROFL!
Your current work, as the rest you had posted before, are really funny and cute. They're different every time. What's more, they don't get to be so OOC. Wish you had more SanaYuki, though. But it's alright. We do get a lot from Niou(hewhoquittedplayingdoubleswithYagyuutocosplayTezukainfrontofFuji).
Niou is the best. I could not ask for more.
Oh well, until next time/fic/whatever.

P.S.
Do you know TeniMyu?
Ria Sakazaki
2007-10-12 . chapter 1
i want more HaruChoutaRyou! but this chapter is cute and amusing. i always picture what would happen if Haru, Fuji and Yuushi get together. seems like Haru's still the most ruthless among the sadists and the ruthless characters in POT. ^_^

update soon!
juz-a-reviewer
2007-10-11 . chapter 1
Nice... You're on the roll again...
serenitatis417
2007-10-11 . chapter 1
Haha, adult hide and seek. How you managed to come up with that was amazing. And what with the two weird clues...

Especially with the second one. Quite smart.

Although, was there actually a quicker way of solving it?

Well, congrats on reaching 50. And update the next one soon~~ Need some crack to stimulate my brain. Been studying for tests for the past week. Bleh.
SilverCyanide
2007-10-10 . chapter 1
(Remind me to kill my mom or something. I'm practically banned from the compy for absolutely no reason, which is why I couldn't read this yesterday.)

Zomgs! Just...*dies* That was flippin AWESOME! HIDE AND SEEK! *dies* That's just...wow...just wow. Love it (like all of your stuffs). Definitely one of my favorites (and I'm curious to as what the "slightly more obvious way" was, though I think I might have an idea. XP)

*insert hearts that fanfiction doesn't like*

~KA
Hropkey
2007-10-10 . chapter 1
“I think you’re getting confused with that little acrobat ho of yours,” he drawled. He scooped the biscuits back into their packet.

“I’m sorry?” Oshitari looked genuinely puzzled. “Acrobat what?”

“Ho. Now if you’ll kindly excuse me…”

“Hoe? Ahh, in reference to his build. That’s a first – people normally say ‘rake’.”

There was a three-second moment where Niou looked Oshiatri squarely in the eye (well, as squarely as he could through those meaningless glasses) to see whether or not Oshitari was completely taking the **.

Apparently, he wasn’t.

Ohmigod, I haven't laughed this hard in AGES. This was even more brilliant than usual. Sorry I didn't review earlier, I had a massive headache.

As for the ramble... We watched Beauty and the Beast in French class yesterday! IN FRENCH! It sounds even better. I swear, I haven't seen that movie for 9 years, and when I do... it's in french. Afterwards, me and a little group of girls were reading the "hello around the world" poster in the classroom. And they put the pronounciation of hello "HE-llo." So you'd pronounce it heelo. XD And then in some asian language I can't remember, hello is "dada namona." Which of course sounds like "dad died of pneumonia!" So we have 5 13-year-old girls going around to each other all day saying "heelo!" and "dad died of pneumonia!"

Is it even possible to dye biscuits? Hmm...

Also, I have manga club today! Uber-fun. Last time we met (two weeks ago), I was doing a manga spotlight (where you introduce a series to the class) and I chose... Loveless. And there are 11-year-olds in this club. It was ALOT more fun than I thought it'd be- at one point when everyone was laughing, this one guy yells out "IT'S CALLED YAOI!" and "EXTRA POINTS TO ANYONE WHO KNOWS WHAT YURI IS!" He's also called pocky-dude, cause he gave a stick of pocky to everyone in the club. he brought quite a bit of pocky. Today I'm planning to introduce... PoT to the class! =D I'm also bringing my whole manga collection, give or take about 6-7 books that I can't find right now.

Rambly enough for you?
Batool
2007-10-10 . chapter 1
yay! wasn't that just fun to read *nods her head madly* you're one hell of a genuis writer dear! and I totally love the appearance of Fuji Syusuke in this story, because I love the guy (*don't we all?)
rei
2007-10-10 . chapter 1
I love your drabblethings! Keep writing 'em!
Fachel
2007-10-10 . chapter 1
You don't know how much I envy Brittany right now.
Or you for that matter, and your fantastic writing SKILLZZ. :D

Your Niou portrayals are quite possibly the epitome of awesome, so much that I might just feel the need to run off into the sunset crying. That act of adoration [or should I say pathetic-ness,] is slightly difficult to achieve, as the sun decided it hated me and ran off to the other side of the earth. Little bastard.

Cue the horse tranquilizers.
fool of hearts
2007-10-09 . chapter 1
Oh, an update! -Squeals-
Ha. That's adorable. Makes you wonder what Niou did to my tensais (Yes, MY tensais. Muahahaha. I think all the tensais are just way too cute).
And it also makes you wonder about the easier solution, unless it was the one Marui guessed, but I don't know. My brain hurts. Too much last-minute homework.(x
More! =D
lupuslupin
2007-10-09 . chapter 1
Awesome! I always adore your stories.^^
But...I thought Niou was colour blind in one of your earlier stories...or am I making this up?
Gah! Absolutely fantabulous nonetheless.^^
Olivine
2007-10-09 . chapter 1
this seems so clever x__x I didn't understand it half the time.. have to reread it.. But still, I love the idea of Yukimura sending his teammates on a detective hunt (that's what he did, right? o_o). That is why I love Rikkaidai.

favorite passages:
“No you don’t! I’m a Special Agent, so I outrank you.”
“Field Marshal Yukimura promoted me. I’m a Specials Class One.”


“How the hell did you know I found-“ Niou stopped. Then, like a character from a horror film, he turned his head round and up towards the school building.
Marui waved cheerfully down at him from the first floor library window, grinning like an idiot.


and a bunch of others. And I liked how you incorporated Fuji and Oshitari instead of /just/ Rikkai members. That made it fun :)
Keep writing, I look forward to each one!
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