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BeachCat
2008-09-27
ch 1,
abuseHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA*GASP!*HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA*gasp again* Oh man! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
reighost
2008-09-02
ch 1,
abusebuggs bunny i swear to god...
Estrella85
2008-04-12
ch 1,
abuse0_o So cute yet ackward. :) great one-shot!
Ceirwy
2008-03-22
ch 1,
abuseI saw it coming but it didn't make the story lose any of its effect and punch. Kept me smiling the whole way through.
Min Farshaw
2008-03-06
ch 1,
abusekeehehhehehehehehe

... You can take a snicker like that all the way to the bank.

Well executed. Good job.

~min.
A Bibliophile
2008-03-05
ch 1,
abuseThis really ads to Aoko's theory that Kaitou KID is gay. ^_^
Spike-tan
2008-02-13
ch 1,
abuseOoh~ wow.
Can I ask you a question?
How did this little spurt of pairing Heiji and Kaito come to be? My sister and I thought of it a long long time ago in a small roleplay, and we have loved this pairing so much but there were none on FF, and finding it on google did not result in anything, so how did this come about? D=
Jeva
2007-11-27
ch 1,
abuse*snerks* Oh, it figures that Kaito is able to kiss another guy and not have it seem awkward at all. *continues snickering*
tively-split
2007-11-12
ch 1,
abuseEw!

*Gros*

But it's nicely well done and nitty-gritty and stuff. Still, I have one nit... Somehow, I expected it to be more likely that Heiji would say 'blasted' instead of 'goddamn' or something...
Ohnoesmilk
2007-11-10
ch 1, anon.
abuseLoved it! Your writing is always so good!
ferryboat George
2007-10-30
ch 1,
abuseLOL, that was very cute
chalicity
2007-10-29
ch 1, anon.
abuseXD

i laughed until i died. seriously, that was grade A entertainment there, thanks for sharing! :D
beam2008
2007-10-16
ch 1,
abuseNice short story. No complaints here about any errors.
Najrala
2007-10-14
ch 1, anon.
abuseI love it!
Raindrops Of Fluff
2007-10-10
ch 1,
abuse*hiccups* This is really sweet and a seriously good read! Thanks so much for writing this, and it's definetly my favourite story out of all the stories that you've written!
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