I just realized. Mary Poppins's carpet bag was made by Time Lords and now it seems the Doctor's pockets are as well.

now, I quite prefer that ending to the Doomsday version. You should see if BBC would be willing to reshoot that finale...

Nicely done! That is how it should have happened, I was always a bit suprised that the Doctor didn't somehow manage to save Rose through some crazy antic or other.
The best part was the insertion of yourself into the story. Very cleverly done, and very funny.
No complaints really...except the antarctica thing was a bit random.
Keep writing, you're very very good at it.

That was great! Write the series, I like this project. I always wanted to see somebody else's season 4 (or 3, if Doomsday never happened). And I just love Doctor's pockets...!

totally this is what should have happened! i mean cmon doctor theres gotta be some way... and you, doctor who producer people! YOU CANT JUST WRITE ROSE OUT! i mean whats up with THAT?!?!?! *clears throught* *looks around* *sheepishly* oh um yeah sorry about that *clears throught again* got caried away.. what where we talking about? oh yeah! i totally agree... kewly fanfic!! :D

ahh ha ha! Awesome! After watching Doomsday through a few times I had the same idea. Gotta have SOMETHING in there Doctor. Eventually I settled on Four's scarf! ;3
And I really like your little cameo!
Wonderful piece. :D Concise, witty, and delightfully random.

ROFL! I loved it!

Doomsday should have gone like that...

haha thats fantastic!! You should most definatly write at least a sequel if not a whole series