I really liked that. Very cute and delivered in a wonderful style. Flowed really nicely too! Great job.

I loved it.

How like Shikamaru "I memorized..." aw.

Amazing piece!

There are no other words for this story except I LOVED IT!

I loved how you worked the whole Prince, Princess thing into it.

ADORABLE!

Keep up the excellent work :]

- Bree

wow, that was incredibly written, I love the last few lines :)

absolutely loved it. sure, it wasn't your regular sasusaku, but it was just as good -your handle with the characters and the way you write them makes it seem as if any pairing is possible

keep it up! :D

ShikaSaku is a brill pairing... Kakashi the sec of porn, lol

really good, actually

the talk between shikamaru and sakura was...entertaining? amusing?

either way, it was one of the good parts of the story (for the funnies)

Review number two! I'm catching up!

Well. I LOVED this, because NaruSakuShika is one of my FAVORITE triangles of all time. But it's so strange, and so hard to write - but you've done it wonderfuly. And it's (mildly) ANGSTY! THAT is talent. SERIOUSLY.

And the moments between Shikamaru and Sakura were hilarious and adorable. LOVED!

What I adored most was the fairytale take on it, because I LOVE fairytales, and I love spinoffs and just-THINGS based on them.

Also, I loved the colors thing. I don't know, I just love things like that in stories.

Seriously, this was just fantastic, al around. -favs as well-

ah, delicious. the whole fairy-tale metaphor worked beautifully; I love how you put thought into each of their roles, as Naruto did, kind of pulling the reader along...and it was just so sweet, made me smile :) love the dialogue in the last bit, haha.

Gorgeously written. Shikamaru - oh God, excellent, humorous, and somehow you also managed to make it angsty at the same time, you're *brilliant* is what you are - and Sakura, and Naruto. Naruto breaks my heart. The - the *fairytale* aspect, and the whole thing is incredible. I love it. I do. Thanks so much for writing :]

we cannot forget the sex XD

lol with this story

keep writing

bye

omg this was the best! "and the sex" pssh Shika. we know you love her. dont hide from the burning love of youth! YOSH!