Reviews for War of the Monsters

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jcogginsa 2008-06-26 ch 9,	abuseking caeser has the abilities to redirect lasers why didn't he.also it is yautja. coincidentily,wolf is the name of the predator from AVP2
jcogginsa 2008-06-26 ch 1,	abusewhat about zone fighter,ultraman,and the giant mecha spiderman from japan
jcogginsa 2008-06-26 ch 3,	abusewhat about a terminator
Kendell 2007-12-20 ch 16,	abuseCool final chapter, the only slight problem I have is that you could of been a bit more discriptive of the final battle, other than that you did a great job. You are improving though you still have some room for improvement but you're doing great. Cool to see my verson of the Outsider in there, though he has a bit more powerful enemies than in the fic I'm using him. Anyway great chapter!
Kendell 2007-12-18 ch 15,	abuseSorry it took me awhile to get here, been busy. Nice chapter, you have improved even more. The only slight problem I have is the Sadavar killed a Yatuja that easily, no offense but those things are too hard to kill by shooting them with a pistol. Anyway good chapter, like the intrusion of the Temanators, are there going to be any Xenomorphs (aliens)? Also could you work my design for the Outsider in some how? Just asking. Keep up the good work!
Kendell 2007-12-15 ch 14,	abuseCool chapter, You are getting better, I haven't seen Black Scorpion but I've wanted to. You've got a lot of monsters in this fic, I'm wondering who this new one is. You are improving. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Kendell 2007-12-09 ch 13,	abuseIntresting, well the villians are in trouble now, not only do they have to deal with kaiju but they have to deal with some of the most powerful warriors in the universe, I must ask will Arnold's character from Predator be showing up, I love that movie! I was even planning on using a predator in one of my fics, I didn't but I was planning. Intresting chapter, you are getting better at a very fast pace, keep improving!
Kendell 2007-12-03 ch 12,	abuseNice, that was a good chapter. You are still getting better and I'm glad to see it. I'm also glad to see that finally lets us remove the egotistical ramblings of some people (looks at Flamerising). Keep up the good work!
Kendell 2007-11-30 ch 11,	abuseCool chapter, you really are improving. Keep up the good work!
Kendell 2007-11-26 ch 10,	abuseNice chapter, you are still improving. I liked the talk between the three super villians at the start. Keep up the good work!
Kendell 2007-11-21 ch 9,	abuseNice chapter, you did better on the monster fight though I'm not entirely sure King Ceasar would curse, seeing as he is supposed to be devine. I do know what the Yatuja are, at least I think I do, they're the aliens from the Predator movies. Anyway nice chapter!
Kendell 2007-11-11 ch 8,	abuseCool! Biosaurus won, though I'm pretty sure that Rattler and him will meet again. Intresting how Edd can understand monsters but I was kinda thinking Ed would be more likely to have that all thing considered. Better though I'm not so sure you should translate everything the monsters say, it gets a little confusing. I have a feeling that Biosaurus will be a big part of this fic, considering he, Gyaos, and Rattler are the only enemy monsters that have fought another monster and still reappeared. Keep improving!
Kendell 2007-11-08 ch 7,	abusePretty short but cool. Not sure if they sensed Rattlar or Biosaurus, both have gotten pretty powerful. I liked the personilties you gave them. Can't wait for next chapter!
Kendell 2007-11-03 ch 6,	abuseNot bad, once again you've improved. The only advice I can offer is work on your spelling a little bit and the scene transitions but other than that you're good. Can't wait till next chapter, keep up the good work!
Kendell 2007-10-29 ch 5,	abuseBig improvement, though short it was better writen than the chapters before it. Keep improving and this will continue to get better than it already is. Yeah, Biosaurus reached his adult stage! With all the monsters in this fic I can only imagine what he'll end up like if you keep him in it. Anyway nice job.

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