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Reviews for: artificial allegory
Hellyfabulous 1/13/11 . chapter 1
Very beautiful and sweet. 3
SilverInkblot 11/26/07 . chapter 1
WHAT ABOUT WENDY?

Just kidding. I love it. It doesn't feel like a crack pairing. It makes a lot of sense in my little world of twisted logic.
pink-affinity 10/20/07 . chapter 1
i absolutely adored this. no questions.

i like crack pairings, but you know what i love? crack pairings that actually WORK and MAKE SENSE and you have CREATED THAT.

it was just so wonderful that they were so similar. both fakes in a real world, yknow?

and aw- peternaminé is one of THE cutest crack pairings I have read in a long, long time.

great job.
Lady Hitokiri 10/11/07 . chapter 1
Crack pairing or not, this was amazing. I loved every part of it. o.O You write so well, how come there aren't more reviews?
pixie paramount 10/10/07 . chapter 1
You know what I stated before (and in every other review that I've written for you)? Well, I'm going to be restating it over-and-over again until either: a) I can't coherently think any more because of your awesomeness, or b) I find some way to steal away your talent AND RUN LIKE THE WIND WITH IT, HA HA! :D

["Naminé had met a hero before, with blue eyes more perceptive than people thought, and a heart dead set on saving the world (Kairi)."] - Okay, anything with Namine-or Peter Pan, Persephone, Zu-Zu (ZUKO/KATARA, :DD), etc...-will have my utter and complete love. Pete Pan only adds to that. Peter Pan/Namine? That just makes everything so, so much more awesome.

Not to mention the implied Sora-totally-crushing-on-Kairi but, oh, SORA IS SO, SO MUCH ADORABLE, SUPER-SAVER-OF-THE-WORLD-LOVE!

Seriously, that's what makes me love this piece so much. You imply so many things and you characterize them so, so well. It's beautiful, amazing, and so, so MUCH LOVE.

["He was a fake prince. An imposter.

Just like her."] - afjkflaafhlfah

Must. Remember. To. Breath.

Oh, and the ending? It totally makes me squee. Peter and Namine are so, so believably in love in this it is not even funny. (BUT YOU FORGOT WENDY BUT I DON'T CARE BECAUSE THIS IS PERFECT ENOUGH BUT, OH MY GOD, I GOT A PLOT BUNNY!)

LOVES

- Pixie
aliasfan 10/9/07 . chapter 1
Seriously, I never scroll through the first page of KH fics on But after doing some homework, I randomly scrolled through the first page to see if there was anything interesting posted. Then I came to your oneshot. I read the summary and it intrigued me. I decided to read your oneshot, and I'm SO glad I took the time to do so! Your writing is amazing! I love the little sayings in italics and parentheses. The way you wrote flowed so beautifully and makes me want to read more! :)
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