woah...intense! ^^

Wauw, I'm just at chapter 4 right now but really like you writing style and of course the story!
Go on like this en you will get more reviews from me as I will read more.

Wonderful beginning! I really like your writing style and hope to see more of it in the next chapters. It amazed me that you haven't gotten that much reviews, so I thought my review might help a bit.

Oh man! This was an awesome story. I really liked it. :D

Also, I was reading your profile and I noticed you had listed Greg Ayres and Vic Mignogna as your favorite voice actors. I thought it was kinda cool cause I like them too and got to meet both at an Anime convention. :D

I love this story. You did a great job. I will go and read the sequel now.

Strange dream!

Great story, I can't wait to read the sequel.

Hahaha, my god I just have to review this page! The hobbits are so funny!
While I'm at it I like to review another thing, the hobbits are just almost too cute for words in snuggling around Lilah after the bizzard incident.

What the -- aw c'mon, she had one, ONE chance to save his ass and instead she fell on her knees crying and pitying herself as a weakling? D: She could've changed the outcome and you have her cursing all the names of gods she can think of?? Seems like you didn't want the plot to be altered at all.

Other than that, I really liked your writing style. The story didn't tire me out or bore me, because everything is said at the right moment. Your vocabulary is broad, as for grammar it is correct for the most part; I don't have such sharp eyes to tell whether there are tiny mistakes or not. xD Though your character is, dare I say, a little Mary-Sue-ish...? Perfect and able to take hords of Orcs out all by herself, even when she had few knowledge/training over a couple of months? Dunno.

But anyway, four words: on with the sequel! ^_^;

I just want to say that this story is utterly spectacular. You're an amazing writer with a sophisticated, articulate style that makes your work easy and enjoyable to read without sounding overly simple or juvenile. I just finished reading this story and found myself honestly moved to tears by your final scene.

And props to you for allowing Boromir to live (or allowing us to assume he lives, at any rate)--I don't think I could have ever forgiven you if you allowed Tolkien to have his way.

Give my love to Delilah and Boromir...they deserve happiness.

Josh Groban is amazing. I love him XD

oh I was swearing out loud when I read the last line... left us hanging like that!
please! sequel out fast! otherwise i'll be dying in agnoy waiting for your story! :P

* waiting.. patiently.. trying.. *

*squee* a sequel? can't wait!

Very,very good story. A pleasure to read.

hahaha the start was funny, poor Legolas...

But the end was sad :( now me sad:( lol

oh there will be a sequel? YAY!!