SOO cute XD

Too cute. I really liked the way you depicted Fuu's insecurities when Mugen first showed up. I would be just like him to ignore her and find some brothel. I'm glad he didn't!

Nice story! I honestly dont blame you for not quite haivng the guts to write a lemon, neither do I, I think i've written one..but i'd never post it lol I hvnt the guts for it, so you're one step ahead of me! You've started it off! lol Your story was sweet too, particularly the bit when Mugen was being all romantic :)

Aaw...it is weird to say it was cute? Because that story was adorable. You managed fluff in a way that kept them both in character. *sigh* i loved it please write more, but not necessarily for this story

I liked this a lot. It was very convincing :)

I really loved everything except the end, it just seemed kind of sudden and out of place, a little too much info. Perhaps because there wasn't really any lead in to it, everything else was subtle and kind of gentle, though it was still hard enough to be Mugen, then suddenly it turns raunchy.. But I did really love the parts previous to it, the confession was really cute =)

The language Mugen used was kind of weird (country almost) but I guess it fit him. I loved your story! It was awesome and lighthearted.

Cool! ^~^
-Luna

that was kind of funny and it was kinda romantic i didnt really think mugen used THAT much language though! =)

cute

not bad

Very nice. Is Mugen up to the challenge ;)

Aww very cute ^^
& smexy.
God they make such a
wonderful couple.
Great Job.

XD! That was cute! Very well done; I tip my hat in your direction!