oh please write more (groveling)

by god me to nity night

funkey town upsidedown sorry thats all i have to say GREAT STORY

yes it is funny and i'm not so sure diske isn't gay he acts so soft and girly i wouldent be suprised if someone saw him puting on makeup

yay the story just got interestinger gogo elvenknife (and faceman poor poor faceman ALL HAIL FACEMAN!)

so whats the deal satoshi likes risa? confusing and for people who don't know what monotonus means it means to talk in that bleak dull voice i think don't kill me if i'm wrong had too many near death experiances today,sister

totaly funkeytown where's it heading

...Well then...what a...weird ending. Haha. But the soba was an easy one...And you got the Dare or Double Dare idea from class, didn't ya? Great story tho. :)

Aw, you're no fun...think dude think! But Imma read the next chap, so wjhatev

it's very funny. Diarrhea. :)

kawaii!

love it! update please?

*puppy dog eyes*

_ M. Galinda love Satoshi...

this is really good. i can't wait for the next chapter.

-DTW-

its quite good for your first fic, but ha lol its hilarious! lol

it's interesting what you have writen so far although you claim it's boring:P maybe if you can try to make the chapters a bit longer it will be much better...

one more thing...why did satoshi's house had to be untidy and messy...it would have been nicer if his house was clean and elegant...to impress the girls:))

oh and i'm looking forward to reading the next chapter and see what happens between satoshi and risa

you're evil! you could've atleast added another line saying who it landed on! aww come on! you can't just stop it right there!

:)

UPDATE asayc!

:)

dude, :( your fic kinda made me hurt myself, too.

i was laughing so hard that all the air in my mouth was gone already and i couldn't breath. and when i finally breathed in my heart started to pound so hard.

and that hasn't happened to me in while...

..but it's okay! :):) your fic is SO funny! and i kinda like the feeling of being breathless... so.. please do take away my breath again...and soon!

:D ..hahaaha...