You set the tone for this scene perfectly... And Cloud's lines and personality are perfectly in character. And of course, I really like the last paragraph ;).

Beautiful!!
Just stunning!
Well writen and very well done!
Keep up the good work!

Aw, I loved it.

It been a while since I read a short story that I liked. I enjoyed the moment between Cloud and Aeris.

very nicely written piece. i like it! ^^

Aw, that was sweet. ^__^

oh. I like this a lot. I think the whole 'Fireworks light up the darkness' thing was way cute! =)
Keep it up! Go Cloud/Aerith

that's so sweet...:) I loved the 'brushing back her hair' and the kissing scene the most. XD