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thelightningstrike
2008-11-24 . chapter 11
That was a really good idea and a wonderful drabble!
auntiem911
2008-10-28 . chapter 40
All i have to say is so Ron and good job!

Morgan } Auntiem911
Steph.107.
2008-07-20 . chapter 39
Brilliant, I loved all 39 chapters :D
Penny
2008-07-09 . chapter 39
Poor Ron, I guess he was coming to the realization about Hermione and that was inhibiting his ability to cast the spells. He should have told her the truth.

I love that Hermione was proven wrong. She obviously will never understand Luna, they are just too dissimilar. Too bad Luna missed Ginny's matches, Neville's appointment as Herbology professor and all those weddings. At least she met Rolf through her hunts.

Great drabbles as usual. I can't wait to see what you come up with next.
SharkiesGirl
2008-06-21 . chapter 39
Wow! That was a terrific ending to a great story. Lol.
I love the mood that this had, and how Hermione was FINALLY proven wrong. Just fantastic!
Great work.
Thanks,
Sharkie
xoxo
SharkiesGirl
2008-06-21 . chapter 38
Lol! Absolutely spectacular! You left me in awe! I love how Ron is thinking about his love for Hermione, and I like the setting you did for it.
Very very well written.
Thanks,
Sharkie
xoxo
Penny
2008-06-13 . chapter 37
I really like your take on Professor Neville, he seems like he'd be a great teacher. Molly giving Hermione the book is so touching and sweet. Dora taunting Remus with threats of sending Ted after him is a cute way to show their reconciliation. Ron wanting to make up for abandoning Hermione and planning something to make up for it all is adorable. Little James being there to comfort his Aunt Hermione even while asleep is so sweet. The gossip in Gryffindor tower is something that I think that Hermione and Ginny will never fully escape, but that's okay. Percy doesn't need to worry about being too ambitious, Arthur's right Fred wouldn't have wanted him to keep his life on hold. You're a great writer, please keep it up.
unique.normality
2008-06-12 . chapter 26
Harry would do exactly that
he would try to be the best father he could
unique.normality
2008-06-12 . chapter 9
these are awesome drabbles
I love 'em
15stars
2008-06-08 . chapter 37
this was so cute! i've always wondered what would happen when hermione came back, and the way you put this was just amazing! i loved it!

great job, keep updating this story- they're always great!
SharkiesGirl
2008-06-07 . chapter 37
Aww...that was absolutely adorably sweet!! It has left me speechless. I just love how Hermione 'smiled to herself as she looked at her name in sloppy script" - you showed that there is true love between them, as she likes seeing that messy handwriting. Very cute.
One tiny spelling mistake "Ron sent you one two" should be too.
Thanks for a lovely chapter,
Sharkie
xoxo
SaRaPiE
2008-05-17 . chapter 33
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SharkiesGirl
2008-05-14 . chapter 36
Aww...that was gorgeous. I loved how you wrote Dora's and Remus' interaction; it was very believable. Remus' fears were voiced very well.
Your placement of words in this chapter was very well written- it made it all the more powerful.
Spectacular job!
Thanks,
Sharkie
xoxo
Suzy Doyle
2008-05-13 . chapter 36
I really like this, its a brilliant little collection of one shots. I particularly liked this one between tonks and lupin, very good story
SharkiesGirl
2008-05-01 . chapter 35
Oh! How do you always do that! You make me cry with only a drabble. Lol.
This was very touching, very beautiful and extremely powerful.
This sentence ("Arthur closed his eyes as if those familiar words physically stung.") was a very good portrayal of a father reminded of the loss of his son. You got it spot on. And Percy thinking twice about the job that he loved the first time because of his fear of losing his family again, hurting them like the first time was written so spectacularly. One of the best things I have ever read on this site.
Nice job seems like an understatement here.
Thanks,
Sharkie
xoxo
P.S. It really was perfect!
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