Wow, and I thought your stories about Lyle and Bennet/Claude were good. This one had me rolling.

This is the best first-time story I have ever read.

The story was exquisite in every conceivable way. The style was great, and the dialogue supported the narration. There was delightful uncertainty, even backing away from the situation the men got themselves into; the characters didn't fall head over heels over each other but found ways to cope regardless the sheer awkwardness; the details and the act were plausible, especially the need for the one to finish after the other; the banter was awesome.

These stood out to me in particular:

~ “Now’s not really the time to get sensitive, Ted.”
~ “You know, I’m just going to stare at this headboard, and you just do whatever you need to do.”
~ “I think I hit your prostate.”
Matt nodded faintly, his energy now completely drained out of him, “Nice. Thanks, Ted.”

Fantastic!

Is there any chance you might write more with the pairing and the rating? Along the same length, too? Please, tip me off if you do.

I don't even like this pairing, but you've written it so very well. Your writing is sparse and yet very to the point, and despite this being a PWP, I can tell so much about the characters through the sex, which makes this so good.

Hey, have you ever tried writing Hiro/Ando? It's my OTP and I think you'd be a great writer for it if you think it's hot ^_^