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hermoinelvsronald
2009-07-10 . chapter 1
aw what nice fluff
gotta luv it and great writing ideas
goes to show that bella can dance when nones looking!
keep up the good writing
HeswamtoFrance
2009-07-08 . chapter 1
This is very cute and sweet. I do want to mention that in a typical waltz the lady's right hand would be holding the male's left and her right would be upon his shoulder with is in the center of her back, generally resting on or just below the bra strap. The way this was described reminded me more of high school dances where you 'hug and sway'. You have the right, as the author, to describe it however you may choose. The feeling is evident and lovely regardless.
George
rockenweirdo
2009-02-01 . chapter 1
Aw! That's so sweat! You captured their relationship really well!

I loved it!
MadderThanTheCheshire
2008-12-06 . chapter 1
Aww! That was so sweet!!
hana zushi
2008-09-26 . chapter 1
AW!
cute to the max.
awesomme job
silly bj
2008-09-06 . chapter 1
A nice sentimental one shot.
PurdueLiz
2008-08-18 . chapter 1
Aw. Yup, that about sums it up. Beautifully written, very touching.
ibelieveintruelove
2008-08-14 . chapter 1
Wonderful fluff. Very romantic and cute, I loved it!
twilighter616
2008-08-02 . chapter 1
That's so sweet!
:D
molto.amore
2008-07-30 . chapter 1
That was simply adorable. A typical (and real) Edward and Bella moment. Well done. It was wonderful.

-Candy
Ein Kampf kann eine Lebenszeit
2008-07-04 . chapter 1
"...do you know how many pairs of shoes we will have to buy?" I loved that line. And it's a relief to think that there are other people out there who think that Bella isn't always a klutz.
bookworm1992
2008-05-26 . chapter 1
Your stories kick other stories' butts.

I love the way you write :]
Werewolf Enthusiast
2008-05-06 . chapter 1
aw, i liked that!! it was so fluffy and cute!!
the brunette writer
2008-05-03 . chapter 1
i love this one..i've read it like 20 times. i just keep coming back to it. like i'll read other author's stuff and i just come back to this to read. thanks for making ths amazing.
hibiscusqt
2008-03-23 . chapter 1
I just thought you should know that this one shot made me cry. No other Twilight FanFic has ever made me cry before (except for a really funny one that made me cry of laughter). This is absolutely beautiful.
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