 hermoinelvsronald 2009-07-10 . chapter 1aw what nice fluff
gotta luv it and great writing ideas
goes to show that bella can dance when nones looking!
keep up the good writing |
 HeswamtoFrance 2009-07-08 . chapter 1This is very cute and sweet. I do want to mention that in a typical waltz the lady's right hand would be holding the male's left and her right would be upon his shoulder with is in the center of her back, generally resting on or just below the bra strap. The way this was described reminded me more of high school dances where you 'hug and sway'. You have the right, as the author, to describe it however you may choose. The feeling is evident and lovely regardless.
George |
 rockenweirdo 2009-02-01 . chapter 1Aw! That's so sweat! You captured their relationship really well!
I loved it! |
 MadderThanTheCheshire 2008-12-06 . chapter 1Aww! That was so sweet!! |
 hana zushi 2008-09-26 . chapter 1AW!
cute to the max.
awesomme job |
 silly bj 2008-09-06 . chapter 1A nice sentimental one shot. |
 PurdueLiz 2008-08-18 . chapter 1Aw. Yup, that about sums it up. Beautifully written, very touching. |
 ibelieveintruelove 2008-08-14 . chapter 1Wonderful fluff. Very romantic and cute, I loved it! |
 twilighter616 2008-08-02 . chapter 1That's so sweet!
:D |
 molto.amore 2008-07-30 . chapter 1That was simply adorable. A typical (and real) Edward and Bella moment. Well done. It was wonderful.
-Candy |
 Ein Kampf kann eine Lebenszeit 2008-07-04 . chapter 1"...do you know how many pairs of shoes we will have to buy?" I loved that line. And it's a relief to think that there are other people out there who think that Bella isn't always a klutz. |
 bookworm1992 2008-05-26 . chapter 1Your stories kick other stories' butts.
I love the way you write :] |
 Werewolf Enthusiast 2008-05-06 . chapter 1aw, i liked that!! it was so fluffy and cute!! |
 the brunette writer 2008-05-03 . chapter 1i love this one..i've read it like 20 times. i just keep coming back to it. like i'll read other author's stuff and i just come back to this to read. thanks for making ths amazing. |
 hibiscusqt 2008-03-23 . chapter 1I just thought you should know that this one shot made me cry. No other Twilight FanFic has ever made me cry before (except for a really funny one that made me cry of laughter). This is absolutely beautiful. |