Kawaii! I adore Itachi and little Sasuke is so cute!
You're great at writing! ( Forgive me if my English is not correct, but this isn't my language...)

beautifully written

This story made my day! That's really really good! You have a very good talent for writting in Itachi's pov! You MUST write more or I will come hunt you down and use my amazing ninja skills to kick your **! JK but I might be very depressed if you don't write more! SO PLEASE write more! PEACE!

yet another amazing start to another amazing story. i can picture/hear itachi talking to sasuke in my mind. i can't wait for the next chapter!

This is a really good beginning, plus it was written in such a great way, with enough details and very Itachi-like. I wonder, just out of curiosity, are you one of those who believe Itachi cares about Sasuke or do you think he sees Sasuke as one more oponent in the world? Well, please continue because it's honestly good and very interesting :)

That majorly kicked **...It has alot of details i like the fact that you have the enough details to make me vizulise(sp?) what they look like and every little detail that is happening to them...Update soon...can't wait for the next chapter